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for Vulnerable

by Greeneyes

person chyara
schedule March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope you are still working on this story. I love what you have done with it so far. I can't wait to see what you do with it.
person Citten
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
whoo that was a deeply emotional chapter! but very good, Isla sure seems to like him though. i cant wait to see what lucius thinks on the last thing hermione said though. Please post soon!!! :)
person Ithilwen
schedule December 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I like this fic, it has a very good premise and I look forward to see how you take the plot on further. But you need to watch out so you don't make it seem rushed, as there is a lot that can be explored and explained here. If it's rushed people will most likely not want to read it since it skips so many important and even less important details. So chapters could stand to be alittle longer, but that is entirely up to you :)

Looking forward to your next installment!
person DB1
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
@5 great story. I like this pairing very much but people only ever write stories about him capturing her or torturing her. It's nice to read a different story. Update soon!!!

DB
schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I wasn't expecting Lucius to even be alive! That was a huge shock!
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please update i've become addicted and i need more!! :-P
person Anon
schedule September 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Citten
schedule September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ok that was an increadable chapter! love how that tuned out! lucius is very upset i cant wait to read the next chapter!!! ido hpoe that the next one is soon. very soon! :)
schedule September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
schedule September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really liking this story, esp. now that Lucius has entered the picture!