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for Working On Us

by Greeneyes

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schedule May 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@12 love the story. Please please update soon

DB
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i really like how the story is going update soon
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
update soon can't wait what happens next
schedule December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
update soon can't wait what draco will try and say to hermione
schedule December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter, Can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule December 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you've worked on this story more- I think it is very good!
schedule December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
update soon i wonder what dracos mother wants?
schedule December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope she talks to him & they work this out. Stuff like this kills me. But it doesnt kill me enough to stop wanted to read this =)
schedule September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, this isn't how I'd have expected a story called "Working on us" to go! There's like zero working here. Please tell me that's going to change? I can understand where your Hermione is coming from, I'd probably be the same way - but then again, I was never married or pregnant, so a decision to leave only ever involved me and some heartache...
Will they work it out? Can they? Are you giving us a HEA? Please update soon...

P.S. This is NOT meant as a flame, please don't take it that way. I'm just expressing my feelings at your writing, which I think is good, and that's what a review is supposed to be for, right? ;)
schedule September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like maybe there is even more to the story. Bad Draco for trying to cover it up, and good for Draco's parents for being pissed at him!