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by Jessica86

person Lynna
schedule July 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story is really interesting, wonder if you'll continue it...
person Luzifero
schedule December 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey...
I really like this idea of a Cat-like creature...

Waiting for more...
person Pill
schedule September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it! My fav type of angst! And the mate must be Draco... Can't wait for the confrontation! Update noooooow!
person Tesgura
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooh Harry's taking that road? That should be funny when his mate insists on claiming him or courting him or whatever they do. How will his mate take the rejection? I can't wait to read more!
schedule August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is really interesting. So if Fred doesn't have wings, then who is his Seme? I hope more is to come soon please.
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
not a bad start so far but you should add more details about his changes, his ears and apparently teeth and eyes arnt mentioned until we get to Dumbledore's office. maybe you should have him look in the mirror before they leave the Dursley's as a way to let the readers in on how all his appearance changed? also it seems odd that Snape would have that info on just a loose sheet of parchment. if you make more sense to have it on a small scroll or have it as a page in a book. i would think if there was such little info it would need better protection then just a loose sheet of paper.
person oOMissGOo
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
okay, i really can't say anything at this time, but i'm ready to read more >.<
person Tesgura
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, that's an interesting creature you've come up with. I like it; and Snape's reaction was dead on I thought, the interaction was brilliant. I wonder if Harry's going to try to say Fred should be his mate, since he clearly didn't know about creature inheritances and whatnot. Silly me, I'm assuming that he has a predestined mate. Is that the case or not? I can't wait to read more!