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March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Again bravo. I was swept away with your words & felt the emotion in your story as if I was living it personally. You paint such a beautiful, sorrowful, sweet image; its heartbreaking in the best kind of way. I hate you for ending it but love the way you did.
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July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was really clever
Thanks
Thanks
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December 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, but I'm kind of sad it ended so soon. One the one hand, there isn't very far for it to go once Snape gets his powers back, but I feel like it happened to quickly.
Overall, the plot of the story I loved. You're a fantastic writer, and I hope you keep it up!
Overall, the plot of the story I loved. You're a fantastic writer, and I hope you keep it up!
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December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww what a great ending! I loved it!
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December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aww, that was sweet *smiles happily*
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October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I started on Chapter 1 and the whole premise is very intriguing! The set up with Severus not waking up in St. Mungo's is a nice change and introducing Hermione's mother as a side character is refreshing too. I liked how realistic your description of Severus awakening sounded!
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October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2: I like Draco's flexible preferences. Somehow it suits him. It was hard to believe that Hermione would be that tactless to joke about Lucius Malfoy's suicide in front of Severus even though she has reason to despise him. (I'm not critisising, only musing, sorry!) but I can imagine Severus lashing out like this when he feels hurt. Very dramatic chapter!
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October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3
I adore Pining!Severus and Pining!Harry :) I also think that you wrote Hagrid very well, though my English isn't good enough to really judge that. It's also nice how you can make readers care for side characters. I think I know what will happen to poor Draco :(
I adore Pining!Severus and Pining!Harry :) I also think that you wrote Hagrid very well, though my English isn't good enough to really judge that. It's also nice how you can make readers care for side characters. I think I know what will happen to poor Draco :(
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October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ch.4 Oh poor Draco (Wait I alrady said that :D)
The sex scene was hot though, and I liked it because I adore Top!Harry (I know
The sex scene was hot though, and I liked it because I adore Top!Harry (I know
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October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chapter so much!