AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Our puppy

by MyladyinRed

person Yaoigirl
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far and I vote for a marriage contract. I think it would be a nice way to develop the plot. ^_^
person dragon
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
like the story so far. how old is harry right now? you should let stuff happen
person blue
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So cute! I can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heya,

I'm really liking where you are going with this story and I hope you keep updating. I have one question though, how old is harry at this point? He's obviously spent enough time with the Dursleys to give him issues. Oh BTW I vote for marriage contract!!! hehe Keep up the good work.

Domina Noctis
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I vote no marriage contract. I like the pack idea... oral and hand jobs at a reasonably young age and full submission shortly after puberty. I don't see Fenrir sharing pack with anybody other than (under duress) Voldemort.
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
let stuff happen...and watch that spelling. The word you meant was steel, the alloy, not steal, as in to nick things. How old is Harry here btw?
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! How old is Harry? He seems really really young but he's obviously old enough to have been impacted by living at the Dursleys for an extended amount of time. Please update soon!
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is good so far and I'm excited to read more.

I vote to just let stuff happen.
person thestralhorse
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love how this is going so far, I can't wait to read more =)
person blue
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*Happy Dance* Loved the update, so hot! Can't wait to see next chapter