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interesting so far, a little rough but practice will make far improved. one word however.

'Woe' and 'woo' are NOT the same. you were looking to use 'woo' ...

Woe:
1. grievous distress, affliction, or trouble: His woe was almost beyond description.
2. an affliction: She suffered a fall, among her other woes.

Woo:
1. to seek the favor, affection, or love of, especially with a view to marriage. Synonyms: court, pursue, chase.
2. to seek to win: to woo fame. Synonyms: cultivate.

(as per dictionary.com, my very best writing source friend online)

great chapter, are you going to do a flash back where they save harry from the dursley's home? poor draco. cant wait till ur next update

YES! I cant wait for more!!!!

i just love thiis fanfic plzs update soon.
i vote there should be no marrage contract but i think draco and harry should have some fun with remus and sirius
(im scottish so i use "nicked" on a daily basias)

Oooh, sexy fun ahoy! I vote Harry stays with his daddies! That'll be such sexy fun! Plus, Draco not getting what he wants should be funny to see too. Can't wait for the next chapter of sexy goodness!

Oh, and I think you meant to type 'woo' instead of 'woe'. Woe means sorrow.

I love this story so far! o3o It's so cute and sweet and I can't wait for chapter four. I want to see what kind of game Daddy Fenrir wants to play. Update soon~

To be perfectly honest I am a tad worried with how Sirius and Remus are with a six year old Harry in this fic considering they are originally his godfathers and stuff and they really shouldn't be into such pedophilia though I have no problem with teenage Harry and them and Fenrir being a pedophile is honestly more realistic

If I may make a suggestion I would like to suggest either the three daddies already know Harry is their mate which is why they have feelings like that or Harry is a creature who feeds off of sex like a succubus or lamia

I like where a succubus can be a male but feeds off of lust by being penetrated sexually while incubi feed through penetration

but I would suggest more along the lines of making Harry a lamiae because of the whole snake thing and it is less used

Other then that keep up the good work though I might skip the child sex scenes

Oh have you considered putting some Weasleys in there in the future because I think Bill would be perfect in that pairing

Prefer no marriage contract. I don't really like harry/draco stories.

No marriage contract! Afterall, he needs to have fun with his daddies!