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for The Webs We Weave

by ChibiChocobo

schedule November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh!!! *fans self* I think I almost had an orgasm! That was sooooooo hott...do you think you could extend it? There are many stories with Tom being a teacher and Harry being the student but I've never seen a Harry!Teacher and Tom!Student but still with Tom on top, gosh the idea is soooo...
person Madxhatter
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting twist on the whole teacher student noncon, I can't wait to see where you take this
person this is hot. period.
schedule September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was intense!!! I do hope you will continue this!!! :D Eagerly anticipating an update!!!! It's so wrong but damn hot! It just send shivers down my spine! Hahaha I just had a bit of problem with Tom "cut[ting]" off Harry's eyes! Lol shouldn't it be gorging out? Oh well! The imagery's still there and disturbing :D
person candycandylover
schedule September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!! I can't wait for you to update. Though, I'd like to know something...I've noticed that both your stories Nightingale and The Webs We Weave are almost exactly the same bar the length of the chapter that you've uploaded. Is this because you started writing one and then, instead of taking it down when you didn't like how you had written it, you wrote a better version of that same story and chapter with a new title?
All the same, I've quite liked your story and hope u will update soon.
schedule September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
why is there no more of this story?! I has such great potential... please continue!
person Kitty
schedule August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omh I hope you have more to write this is a good story so far!
person IndigoInsane
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing. I like how well you write from Tom's perspective, he's such a tricky character to get right and you nailed it! I read Nightingale forever ago and fell in love, I'm glad to see an even better rewrite. I love everything you added and hope that more will come.
schedule August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
winces. poor Harry, however did it come to this? What's keeping Harry from fleeing, or killing himself? Is this magical based? If it was he could offer his memories, if it's not, then poor Harry is screwed.
person VeeVours
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow that lovely to read
hope there's more to come
person Anon
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Evil! I would not have minded seeing more of this.