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person delia cerrano
schedule November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 30 & 31: Soooromantic...sexy...wonderful. Don't stop now!! What happens when the rest of the world and Harry's friends,the Malfoys, Minerva etc find out? And at some point they have to come to an understanding that they are a permanent couple because both want to be a permanent couple...make a family even...live the life they deserve. Their life together is blending together beautifully so far...reading in bed, cuddling, talking...perfect!
schedule October 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh I love this story.And Harry finally being intimate with Severus was AB-SO-LUTE-LY perfect! So many times stories may have sex scenes that I admit I skim past because they are there to fulfill that requirement and it is too typical and quite frankly I've read so many that I just want to get on with the story. But THIS!... this WAS a continuation of the story. Their feelings, their insecurities, their desire to be with each other, and their hesitancy and unsureness with each other...

I loved how Harry was afraid to leave because everything might just stop and I loved how Severus is sure that it will end but can't help himself but allow Harry close anyway and he just wants Harry to continue being happy. And even the fact that both of them are afraid to discuss what happens next is just so perfect with the experiences they have both had... it totally fits.

Not being able to keep their hands off each other showed so clearly that they are just trying to be as close as they can to each other for as long as they are allowed to be... so insecure the both of them.

I know that will settle down when they are confident and secure in knowing that the other will not leave... I wonder if the tattoo will help convince Severus of Harry's feelings?

This story is so worth waiting for... you are brilliant.
person dawn
schedule October 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What can i say ?! ^_^ great chapter, hot chapter !!!! It was sexy and emotional and i loved it ;) can't wait to read what's coming next !!!
person staar
schedule October 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
so good !!!!!!!!!!! more please !!!!!!!!!
person BAFan
schedule October 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 31

A magnificent chapter, full of playfulness and heavy, hot sensuality. As well as a fair amount of insecurity and fear. I really hope Snape doesn't fuck it up by trying to keep Harry at a distance once term starts up again.
person delia cerrano
schedule September 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!! I thought Harry would never realize he loved Severus in a romantic way.
person delia cerrano
schedule August 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well it's about time!! Now go tell Severus...or let him give you some more hints...something! Poor Severus has known how he feels all this time. Put him out of his misery and give him something to at least hope on though you should know yourself or at least let him touch your tatoo.
schedule August 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
yeah!!! *jumping up and down* I am so glad that Harry finally figured out that he is in love with Severus! (took him long enough lol) Gosh I hope Severus is able to accept that Harry truly does love him without too much self-denial. I think the tattoo will help to convince him which will be totally awesome to see. I am sooo glad your muse is working for you because I love that this was updated so soon after that last chapter! Sending lots of happy thoughts your way :)
person delia cerrano
schedule August 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-29: Terrific story about my favorite couple. Just sorry it's taken so long for Harry to realize how he feels about Severus though Severus knew long ago. And Harry is still fooling around about it. I'm waiting for Severus touching Harry's tatoo!
person BAFan
schedule July 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 29

Loved this chapter. Harry is slowly working his way towards a new life without having to worry about Voldemort, as is Severus. I have a feeling that this story is almost finished, which makes me sad because I've really enjoyed reading it.