rate_review Reviews

I really dig this story. I just stumbled on it by the time you posted Ch 23 and have to say, I'm pretty addicted. It's really plot-driven (thank God) with some interest and good rhythm between Harry and Draco along the way. Really great, I hope you have other stories because I'm now going to raid your info section. Cheers!

about #23..

You know, I still feel it would be effective
if the mental bond went both ways in times like
these, just in case something dire goes down...or
in Harry's case, to keep 'the pot from overboiling'.

You should be proud, it is a fantastic story. Harry should know by now assuming never gets you anywhere. I do love seeing Draco in his element, he would have succeeded in politics, he has all the mannerisms for it. It was also nice to see a bit of Hermione after so long, I liked that she was concerned about Harry being so reckless. Adam is also rather adorable, I hope they find his parents and cure him, Harry really isn't ready for children. Though that would explain the children (other victims?) running around Harry and Draco in the vision at the start of all this. I'm afraid I am getting selfish, this chapter also felt short and I find myself wanting more, and rather impatiently at that. As always, good chapter and keep up the good work. I look forward to reading your next update, in any of the three of yours in reading naturally.

~Fullmoon

Curious to see what the spell will reveal and what Draco is going to tell Moonstone.

I wonder how har would cope with Malfoys thoughts as a background in his mind.
I hope they can manage to swing this. That mofo is evil and deserves painful things. It'd be nice if those responsible were subject to a spell that makes them feel everything they've done to those poor kids. Will Har trashing the place put back their schedule for a bit?

This is better than last chapter! I can't wait for more!

I find it funny that Harry thinks Ron has a better relationship with Draco when in the beginning they were flirting almost constantly. It must be the tension between, it keeps Harry from seeing straight. I do love that he wants to be closer to Draco, that's the least Draco deserves after everything he has done. It's also interesting that Adam speaks parseltongue, I suspect they are either conjuring up something Voldemort related, or they managed to get a hold of some of Harry's magic. I guess I will just have to wait and see what happens, I'm excited for the twist you mentioned. As per usual great chapter, this definitely wasn't a cliffhanger which I appreciate. Keep up the good work as always, I look forward to the next one as well as Parsimony. Also as I have been raiding your works I thought I would let you know that all I did the last few days was read The Marriage of True Minds, it truly was a great work and honestly as a veteran to fanfiction but a newbie to Drarry I consider myself lucky to have stumbled upon such a good author so early on in my obsession. Thank you for all the wonderful works you keep producing.

~Fullmoon

So what are they going to do.
They want moonstones mgical signature, for what?

What about Adam?

What about Harry/Draco.

I'll guess I'll just have to wait and see!

This was interesting but quite a let down from the previous chapter.

envious Malfoy is envious. I do believe he wants some of that heady Har attention focused on him... in something other than a mere ally. Still, there's child one from the prediction. ^^
It'll be most interesting to see if they can swing this plan... I am surprised though, that they didn't go looking for other prisoners etc. Even if they'd just taken the kid in tow as the went.