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Yay! I got back from a bit of a holiday getaway and had more to read. I love the new chapters. I'm also very worried about them having a powerful evil wizard chilling in one of their rooms, but that balances out with being excited for Draco and Harry sharing a house. Loved Draco using his knee to keep Harry's mind on track and keep him from killing, too-- nicely subtle and seemed very appropriately distracting. Looking forward to the rest, and happy holidays if you believe in any in particular! If not, happy year-end.

So we can await more action of multiple kinds, the content of moonstone's magical signature and a good talk in the next chapter.

Sounds great!

can't wait for the next chappie. moonstone is meat on a stick and doesn't know it yet.
but it looks like draco's about to get up to something interesting.

about # 25...

After reading this, one would think you were channeling
Shizuo Heiwajima, with the 'dead dead dead...', but in
Shizuo's case it's 'kill...kill'. He's from an anime, fyi.

NOW, by the time I get to the end of chapter 26, I should
see fireworks, lamps falling AND lots of athleticisms. :-)

Boy, Moonstone is a bigoted pig! Stupid too. Excellent update!

that's horrible. god grief. how many kids did they drain and or kill with this and what happens to the kid whose new ability is passed on? are they dead too?
at any rate, i wonder what har will do with himself now, once this mess is cleared up?

So, now the stakes are raised. things will have to produces much faster now. rescue the kids before they know moonstone is gone.

Figuring out what Harry wants/needs to do in his life right now, maybe put some Draco in?

Ah Harry always messing up Draco's plans. Good chapter, it was unfortunate that Moonstone noticed something. While I think convicting Moonstone would allow Harry enough wiggle room to maintain in London, I understand his thoughts and reasoning. He's silly if he thinks Draco won't go with him, Harry has lost the luxury of being able to fall off the face of the planet alone (I can see Ron and Hermione going as well but as they have each other it can go either way in my mind, really). There was a sentence in the beginning of Harry's pov that I believe had an extra word, the flow seemed a bit awkward whilst reading. It was a sentence about how the arms of the blue air flew, sadly the exact sentence escapes me at the moment. Anyway, I thought you would like to know. Good work as always, and I can't wait until the next update.

~Fullmoon

Another wonderful update! I can't wait for the resolution of this one because I'm not sure at all how it's going to end!

about #24...

You know, I think you aught to move to LA & become a
scriptwriter. That way you can write to your little
heart's content, with the way you do action scenes. :-)

This was an exciting moment and if I had popcorn I would
have choked to death trying to eat too fast!

Oh, by the way, what chapter was it where Harry & Draco were
hiding in that office? Eye forgetz...