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i so want harry to win and that all those people hurt for hurting the kids

Damn. This cliffie doesn't have another chapter after it.

I may die of suspense. T.T

Very fitting end for Shroeder. He didn't deserve to live anyway. >> But, I am worried about Harry having to deal with the altered phoenix now. That's going to be very tricky. And what about those Healers? Are they still alive? It would be nice for them to actually have some people to take in because of this whole mess. I just hope that the children are okay. Draco doesn't mind that the prophecy is going to come true now, hm? And Harry's fine with that too? Of course, it just confirms what they've been going through I suppose. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Ohh, a fitting death for Schroder IMO. Quick and with out much thought. Seems like the main fight will be with the phoenix, or rather the wild magic that gets stirred up by the hatching phoenix. Looking forward to the next chapter, I've really enjoyed the ride thus far. ^.^

Leania

about #33..

Dammit to HELL! O_o

Lomona, where inside your brain did you THINK it was a
good idea to end it there???

All I can say is you better come wit' it next chapter. I want to see
some fire power & why Harry is the most powerful wizard in the
wizarding world.

Is that right? Wizarding World?

oh...mygosh... just.... oh my gosh... That was freakin' awesome. Harry is freakin' awesome.

Having so much power that it scares people... friends and enemies alike. And having to make the choice to protect others even at the cost of his own life... and doing what has to be done even when friends and lovers may or may not understand. I love this story.

If you have never read it... you seriously need to read The Last Herald Mage series (Magic's Pawn, Magic's Promise, and Magic's Price) by Mercedes Lackey. Your Harry reminds me of the main character Vanyel. I have been in love with the story for years and have read it over and over.

Your Harry... and Draco being the perfect counterpart... this is an amazing story. The plot is so well done and those little interactions between Harry and Draco woven throughout... like how Harry was backed up against Draco had such an intimate feel to it. *sigh* Really awesome :)

well, the kids are safe at least, though i imagine they'll have all sorts of residue damage.
Still, i wonder who or what that voice was. har was in close contact with one phoenix for quite some time, not to mention the tears cried into him, so it should be interesting to see how he interacts with these poor altered beings... oh and the dude responsible... please squib i fy him or something equally fitting. He's scum.

I wish that Hermione would learn to prioritize her lectures and realize that she doesn't know everything about Harry and that not everything that Harry does that's dark is Draco's fault. I'm guessing she didn't know just how bad things had become for Harry before Draco showed up. Stupid Gryffindors thinking that all Slytherins,and Draco in particular, are evil and they are the epitome of good. >< It irks me. I'm glad that Adam is safe in his little bubble. But a phoenix egg? Immortality? When are people going to understand that in order to become immortal you have to sell your soul. Just ask Voldie... Oh, wait, they can't. *snicker* And just how is Harry going to get rid of that egg? Can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh interesting idea there! Threw me off, since I didn't think a phoenix egg would be much bigger than a penguin's egg, and I had the mental image of an ostrich egg or larger. This isn't going to be a story where Harry has his magic "burnt out" is it? I always pout at those simply because IMHO a magical core would be tied to a person's life. Completely gone (a.k.a. burnt out) they would wither away and die (could take years); however having it "locked up" to where its still there but just inaccessible wouldn't cause such a thing. Not that I'm telling you how to write your story, just my opinion.
Another good chapter, and I'll be waiting for the next.

Leania

prediction or not, it looks like malfoy is settling into being a true partner for har. someone who balances him as completely for a mortal to do and he's finding, prediction to the side, that har makes him a very good partner as well.
I agree with one of those last answers to reviews. now is NOT the time to raise moral crisis issues. worry about that when all is said and done.
i wonder where they get child number two... there where two kids in that vision yeah.... goes back to check.