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by Lomonaaeren

schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
But... But...

I don't WANT it to end!!!!!! *sob*
person SP777
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #35...

You realize I actually forgot about this story??? Definitely reading too
many fanfiction...

1.
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is so good i love this harry's right
person :D
schedule February 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear me, finally reached the last chapter to date! Definitely must say I didn't expect to find something like this on AFF and really glad I did. You write in a way that fascinates and pulls in the reader what with all the wit between Harry and Draco, as well as all the small subtleties between every character while making it believable.
schedule February 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
...!

I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!

Seriously, it's great. I have to say, though, I am SO jealous of the battle scenes. I have such a hard time with them, myself. T.T

Update soon??
person Leania07
schedule February 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm true, temptation is the root of all evil ~.^ That was a phenomenal scene and chapter! Seems like Hermionie just can't grasp what needed to be done; if poor Harry let himself feel regret over every death he caused, every life he took, he'd go insane or be extremely depressed at best. I enjoyed this chapter, and sure the fight with the phoenix was short (by some standards) but it was just a vessel for the magic. Fantastic job!

Leania
person SP777
schedule February 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #34...

Wow! O_o

Now this was tha' s***! This is what I'm talking about scenes that
make you sit up & take notice! You came with it, sat it down..and
said 'How ya like me now!' ...and if you didn't understand that reference
I can't help you.

This was a VERY good conclusion to the climax, I don't know what else to say
about it...did you eat some Wheaties before you wrote or something? :-)
schedule February 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well managed har... heheh, for a prediction that horrified him in the beginning, this one is looking like something he can settle easily into. I wonder what they'll do with the parsel kids, can they be retaught english or another language... or at least to read it?
I could feel a bit sorry for the apprentices who were most likely just doing what they were told, the healers though, nope, sorry mio, they deserved it and worse.
i wonder what they'll do with the now squib moonstone.
person polka dot
schedule February 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hermoine is definitely coming out of this as a whiner. I feel bad for Ron.
schedule February 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am super tired and can't really think straight... but that was really cool. I liked how Harry about lost himself and Draco reminded him to return to him. Everything... really really good :)