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for Sanctum Sanctorum

by Lomonaaeren

person SParker
schedule October 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #16....

The H/D in me [..yes I admit I got the bug..] thanks you
for this chapter. I enjoyed 'the connection' Draco was trying
to maintain so Harry didn't crack up TOO much, though I think
Harry had been doing a good job by himself, despite his use of
the dark arts.

As well as the intense moment the Ring created & the maturity Ron
CAN display when he's in Auror mode.
schedule October 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
They're making progress. Great update!
person AlterEquis
schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice to have some spell theorie in the story.

What would Draco have Harry be if he could decide, spell-inventor?


Cheers
schedule October 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Harry can make his own spells? Good for him! Wonderful update!
schedule October 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
mind shaping huh? Damn, Har is scary brilliant. with malfoy's cunning and ron as a good front piece and foil, those bad guys have defiantly bitten off more than they can chew. I'm not saying it's going to be easy but damn, they make a good team. Draco makes a very good Har leash. As for Har, wow, so many impulses he has to still or moved to constantly. Draco's multitasking skills are impressive cause he can still operate with that going on in the back of his head.
person polka dot
schedule October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I would not trust malfoy, he could make harry an indentured servant at this rate. be wary harry
schedule October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
whoa, been a while and wow, what i was missing.
So Har is content to allow himself to be a leashed attack dog for now. interesting.
It's fascinating the way you've brought this together and made it flow.
I also find interesting how Har has no reserve. It's all or nothing. Maybe Draco can bring a bit of balance. He's certainly cunning enough.
person SParker
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #14...

Picture me intrigued. :-)
That was a good chapter, with the right elements of..*insert word here*.

So, does it just connect them emotionally? No other effects as of now?
Because I'm guessing it wouldn't connect them telepathically...or it just
makes them more aware of the other period.
schedule October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14

I like that potion. I'm loving this story. I'm way too overwhelmed to say anything beyond OMFGWONDERFUL but I hope you get the idea. Can't wait to read more!
person AlterEquis
schedule October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lol I missed a chapter, so I was confused but then I had two chapters to read! Lucky me.

How are they ever gonna get Harry's name cleared with Campion acting like Harry?
Lol can't wait to read the talk between Harry and Draco.

Cheers