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Ooh, very impressive that Moonstone can detect Harry's powerful signature like that. Hope Draco and Ron can get Harry out of whatever trap he's now in before they realize who he is. Very exciting read. Keep up the great work!

oh dear, they didn't think to hide that... can you hide that? At any rate, things are up sewage creek without a puddle now. I hope Har can hold out cause they're sure to DoLD him for sure once they realise who they have.

So things are slowly building up. . .something is there, but what.
And why the hell do they need to scrape the faces of the children of?

cheers

about #18...

1. Yes, in a way. ;)
-damn, if that's true you must be up in the
*ahem* 'senior' class with me, maybe I should
say junior, I'm not THAT ancient yet! :-D

2. So an alligator might look sleepy, in the moment before it
lunged and snapped the leg off a deer.
-okay, this had me laughing...and I'll tell you why. I just watched a
TV program on alligators 7 days ago & watching these bad boys attack
made me realize, they're bigger badasses than a pride of lions. So, to
see that line threw me for a loop. :-)

3. Why did the ending of this chapter feel like you cut it in half, like
there was going to be another scene, but you decided against it?

4. By the way, finally seeing the attraction starting subtly between Harry &
Draco..and if I may say so, you're pacing this nicely.

tastes a bit of bile.
That's truly horrible. I hope Malefoy will ease up on Har's triggers when the time comes because damn, do those monsters deserve more and worse than what Har put his mental monster through.
Interesting. If Har's that hard headed, it's going to take something pretty impressive to make Draco more than Har's leash holder.

Oh, before I forget, while reading 'Working with Them', I
came across a name you used 'Ascanio Hall'. Now, I have to
ask is that in relation to Arsenio Hall?
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about #17...

I meant to ask this last time, can't remember if I did,
but how do they know for sure it's Schroeder and Moonstone?
Was the evidence in the last chapter THAT solid? I was thinking
it more of an assumption.

So, it really does have me thinking there's a new player in
the midst.

2. I'm not sure if Draco realizes it, but concern will put him on the
path to ruin & that's from a Malfoy's point of view. :-)

That last part was really evil.

For some reason, I have this idea that the wizard children were killed and the muggle children took their place. But if this is true, how can they trust anything the child told them? It might all be a trick. I bit funny that Ron was sleeping through all this drama, although most of it was just in Harry's mind. Ron is always the oblivious one...

interesting. Har's control is impressive indeed to reign in those impulses all the time. Now, they have something to go on at least.

A clue! and what a nice one.

I hope for Harry that the potion is of when he's starting to feel atracted to Draco. Ik can hear him think already. Touch.Feel.Fuck. lol

Cheers