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about #20...

*wiggles excitedly* Oooo... :-0
Things are about to get crunk like a mutha'!
Will Draco get there in time to calm the beast
or will there be extreeeme chaos???

meow ^_^

Hello! I stalk you off and on between ffnet and here. Found this a few days ago and have been reading it between work and school. As always, your plotting, pace and magical theory are wonderful. I'm nervous now-- I came into this story a bit late, so there was so much to read, but by tomorrow I'll need to wait out the updates. I was uneasy at first with the story, Harry being rather more Dark than is usually one hundred percent possible, but as soon as you mentioned some of the effects of the retrovoyant curse it clicked. "Of course, he's just been going crazy." I think I already mentioned your spell theory once but just reiterate my love of that and insert a lot of foaming at the mouth for it and exclamation points. I'll read more tomorrow, am on chapter 17 as of tonight but need to sleep.

After painful days of waiting, I find myself still lurching at that cliffhanger. As per usual fantastic chapter, your story really is a pleasure to read. I anxiously look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

thr freeing of the beast might just become the problem, yes I see. . .

What a place to leave us hanging dear!

"...Dead wizards everywhere... x 3" (to tune of dead bodies everywhere)
Move faster Ron and Malfoy or there won't be much left when you get there.

Wow. That was intense. Looks like Moonstone is soon going to figure out he has taken a viper to his breast(or maybe a more apt discription would be inviting a lion in his den thinking it's a kitten).

Chapter ... (I think 19?)

You are a diabolical woman! I adore you. My interest in this suddenly ratcheted up. There's not a whole lot I like better than a surprise abduction. 8D (And my brain keeps trying to get me to sign off on these reviews like I would a letter, because I'm still hung up on the letters in the Ashborn update.)

about #19...

...annnd Moonstone is also one of the birthstone for June, I
should know that is my birthmonth, just a little FYI...

So, I need a refresher course on Moonstone's position, which chapter
is it that tells what he does in the Ministry? Because that's a man
with a wee bit more power in his arsenal than what I think he should be
having. He's the Head Auror, right?

..and it's too bad Draco couldn't have some type of 'magical' ear piece
to connect to Harry with, so he could have told him to 'pack it up and GO!'

Still the scraping face thing freaks me out.

Oh no they took Harry! I hope they can free him before they realise it's him.