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I love this chapter though I wish I could feel Harry's love for Draco more than just him putting up with Draco because Draco really loves him. I think it's mostly because everyone keeps saying Harry 'gave in' so I don't feel the genuine love there, YES I have a bias love for Draco and Luna. Haha is it weird that the tentacle sex got me all hot and bothered? Though clutches of eggs creeps me out haha thinking predator and Hellsing.Really happy with Hermione's new beau. Why did Draco's intuition of Oliver's feelings makes me want some hot Dryad-Veela loving? A pouty Ollie makes me squeel! I think most mates would be disgruntled if they feel that they don't get their share of Harry so I hope Harry knows this!

I am SOO HAPPY that Draco's having little baby veelas and they're going to rule the world with PUREBLOOD Supremacy! Haha eventhough it was out of the blue though I kind of expected Shea to have the first baby because he really wanted it(and I was secretly waiting for it)! Maybe the next? Why did Susan say 'why him?' Does she mean why impregnate him first? Or why did Harry choose him as a mate? Because I'm starting to warm up to her b/c I have no issues with her personality just you know her and Harry's relationship but you already explained it in your note so I wont harp on it, if it's the second reason I would totally kick her ass.

Heh, I know the story's not real but there's alot of Draco bashing ( not in this story) that I get really emotional when I see him being mistreated when he's genuinely in love.

LOVE!

Seeing updates from you is always a high point in my day! ^_^

Hey loved the chapter and can not wait till the next, I check at least once or twice a week for updates.
I think it's awesome that Draco is the first preg and has taken over.But please leave some work for Kreacher and for the last time....maybe,
Please update on Cedric soon Pleeeease :(

I loved, loved, LOVED this story. I read it all in one night because I couldn't look away. The theme of your story is very curious, but it captures the imagination of the reader. Your writing is so engaging in that it flows so well. I would love to see the possibility of a side-story, about other creature lines! Like I said, I just couldn't look away! Thank you, Thank you, Thank you so much for sharing your very original idea. I've said to my friends that I love the Harry Potter world, but there's so much that you don't know because of how much the story focuses on the main character and the very singular storyline, but I felt like I was enveloped into the world of Harry Potter and able to read out all the hottest fantisies that could happen. Again, thank you. Keep writing! You're a phenominal writer and I love this story!

Oh god I have a love-hate relationship with this chapter on one hand I love the fact that Draco got together with Harry but I hate that Harry got together with Susan because even with your story I dont feel like they have a connection and I know I'm not being bias because I could clearly feel the connection between Luna and Harry but I feel there was none with Susan and Harry didn't even try with Draco while Draco laid his heart on the line. Is it really just me? He gave a beautiful confession for them and I'm sorry but it was really really obvious that he wasn't even trying with Draco because he got together with the other mates with much less connection, I really don't want to seem like i'm insulting you, I just feel really bad for Draco because it seems like Harry is only being with him because he pities him rather than love. In the end, I was hoping that Draco would find someone who would love him unconditionally, god I'm really crying for him. You must hate me, don't you? I;m really sorry.

AAWWW!

Sweet chapter, and I'm so happy for you!

I have some tentative plans for the future as well, but I don't want to say too much for fear I might jinx it. Suffice to say a guy I like needs a mother for his children, and I might get some permanency out of the deal. Not exactly romantic, but unlike my stories seem to say, I'm more of the "marriage of convenience" type.

Try to keep to the writing at least a bit a day to keep the muse strong, and I can forgive the longer waits.

blinks... wow, two mates in one chappie. Still, what changed his mind about draco? last time roundthey were at a sort of stalemate and i doubt draco's going to want to move into Grimald. do Veela need to be close to their mates in this? what was Luc crying for... *looks quizzical.
heh, have some endless questions. >>

Hey loved the chapter and thanks for the comment.
So knew that Draco and Luna would be joining but didn't think Susan...
Oh and just one more tiny little thing almost not worth mentioning.......
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE TELL ME CEDRIC WILL BE JOINING PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice <3, I think Draco's mate story almost beats Shea. Glad your back and keep up the good work!
No worries, you post chapters often enough!

For some silly reason my last post came out as nice

It is nice, and very good too! Great story line with Draco, I love Susan with him even more than Oliver!
Shea still wins it for me though!

Keep up the great work, and no worries, you post often enough =3