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for Chameleon's Song

by SomethingElse

person Anon
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow.... I kinda want Draco to change but also stay the same =\
In a family that large there'd have to be some conflict. I don't like it too much but that ending was needed
Draco did seem a bit strong, guess its the babies? As for the household together it's starting to fit very well <3
person gobert
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved Cedric...but what's not to love?

I truly enjoy your Draco - he is true to character and I loved his response in the end!
person CocoaMocha
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
He's hurting the bearer of his children?? And it was Ron who was in the wrong. Then to force him to RESPECT someone, it's one thing to ask him to TOLERATE but RESPECT? I hope the whole house comes down on him! God, I hope Draco doesn't forgive him. Being a dominant doesn't mean you become pigheaded! I'm so angry with him! Love Cedrics' mating though! Hot! Please update soon!!!
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love the last chapter. Ron needs to grow up and treat his wife like a woman, not a slave.
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am looking forward to him being knocked down a peg or two:/ Fun story, thanks for sharing it!
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
glad to see more of this, and ron has just become absolutely insufferable...*evil grin* can't wait til mione hears all that "got her trained" bit, he'd never hear the end of it. and deff waiting for harry to get some sense knocked into him, can't imagine any of the others are going to let him get away with that. keep up the good work :D
person kyuubichild717
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Harry was way wrong in treating Draco that way. Ron was the one who needs to apologize not Draco. How he is treating his wife is wrong and personally I would not stand for it. Draco is Harry's mate the first bearer of his children, he should be defending Draco not hurting him!
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
No, i agree. I mean, i don't like the way Ron is treating his wife. There's a difference between sub and doormat, and Ron is definitely Doormatting his wife. I'm glad Draco won't stand for har trying to do the same to him.
I'm glad Ced's on board. Its going to be quite an act balancing all of his mates. It's a good thing most are understanding beings.
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Stupid Harry!!! Ron was in the wrong there!
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
finally got caught back up with this one, cant believe i was that far behind actually (like bac to him and the twisn talking lol) great job with this, love the interactions with all the different characters and how harry has to address everybody's little neuroses lol keep up the good work :D