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August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
continue soon!!!!!! it sounds sooooooooooooo interesting. by the way what magical creauture is he anyways? i LOVE magical creature fanfics when harry potters involved.
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August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I'm really liking this so far. I LOVE Dom!/Top!Harry especially paired with Sub!Snape (hint hint). Can't wait to see where this goes.
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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Good chapter length. It flows well and I'm intrigued about Harry not yet showing too many changes!
Since this is about seldom done things I want to suggest a few things hard to find in HP fanfiction!
Maybe have Harry with one ( or more) people from each house.
Someone nor currently going/ teaching at hogwarts. Oliver wood!
Harry doing something bad he has wanted to do- and get away with it!
Since this is about seldom done things I want to suggest a few things hard to find in HP fanfiction!
Maybe have Harry with one ( or more) people from each house.
Someone nor currently going/ teaching at hogwarts. Oliver wood!
Harry doing something bad he has wanted to do- and get away with it!
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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
There wasn't much to comment on the second chapter. But, I did want to say that I'm glad all of the people who died in the books are alive in this fic. I really hated the way JK Rowlings killed people off. Hedwig was the last straw for me. I'm mean why kill the fucking bird! That's just wrong. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter and how the story will unfold.
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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I'm loving the story so far. I wanted to know if you were planning on having any Harry/Ron action?
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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Not bad this chapter. Can't wait for things to build up. So far, the pacing is good.
I checked the HP Lexicon - you're right, it's the "Wand Arm" as Harry's wand went flying when startled by Sirius in his grim form.
I checked the HP Lexicon - you're right, it's the "Wand Arm" as Harry's wand went flying when startled by Sirius in his grim form.
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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i'm gathering that harry's critter bits are going to kick in slowly like since there was no major makeover on his b day. it'll be interesting to see what they do, what he becomes and he and everyone react to it.
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far! cant wait for the next chapter! i agree with one of the other reveiwers. there arent enough fanfics with a dark or dom harry. i hope you keep going with this one. as for a magical beastie.... well i like drakens but that might be a little bit because of another fanfic im reading on here XD anyways keep up the good work and i cant wait to read the next one!
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You have me hooked, I look forward to the next chapter Xx
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you summpn the but by lifting your wand into the air not by sticking out your thumb