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for Chameleon's Song

by SomethingElse

person bill560682
schedule August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
as far as pairings go i would suggest the creevey brothers since i think they would do almost anything if asked by harry potter thier hero. if harry asked them to suck his cock every morning they would likely fight over who got to do that job, an i likely see them also fighting over who got to take the great harry potter's cock up thier ass as well.
person bill560682
schedule August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
sounds to me like draco is pissed off that blaize likes potter and not someone more proper like himself.

i think both fliure and gabby will be in the group to line up to bed harry even going so far as to bed him together if that is what he wants. in book 4 they only hint at how old gabby looks they never say for a fact, so if veela look younger then they are until they come into thier powers then she could only be a year or two younger then harry.if see was say 12 back then but had not changed yet so she only looked 8.

i think harry should give the dursley's a nice going away present, which can be shown in the form of a flashback. an the present is done on vernin and patunia's wedding ring in the form of a truth spell so that they can not ever tell a lie other then when it comes to things about magic. how many garden parties is harry's aunt going to be invited to after she starts tell the whole truth about everything all the time. an how many business deals will harry's uncle lose when he has to tell the whole truth about the item he is trying to sell.

so is harry able to mate with house elves as well, or how about centures, or maybe even goblins?
schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
meh, like you said. its your fic. play with it as you will... besides, cliche or not, if its done well it can be very effective.
Draco and Harry as possible sibs... oh. they are just going to LURVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV that. *snickers.
schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for clarifying that, I wonder if Lucius is going to fall for the son?
nice chapter Xx
person butterpie
schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Curiosity compelled me to read this, and I must say you're doing a wonderful job of it. Hurray for a dominant Harry story! So many siblings for him too. I wonder if you meant for Lucius and Draco to mate with him, oh well it's your call. Maybe you can include a siren or other water based creatures too. Other possible choices could included jinns,or other air based creatures. There are so many creatures in mythology to choose from. Could Seamus be part leprechaun for this? He is the shortest in Harry's year and cute too. Anywho I love this, carry on!
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ok...tonks is snapes daughter. terry is remus' son. and who it patsy or did you mean pansy. oh, whichever she is sirius' daughter...who the others??? ooh....can two be the twins
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the heads up, I love writing Hermione orientated fics but I'll read absolutely anything...
I'm loving the direction your story is going although I may to read chapter 3 again just make sure that I've got all of relationships figured out right. Xx
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OoOoOo~!! It's getting interesting~! :D

btw...do you happen to have a FF account? I'd like to put this on my alerts list! :)
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
* wrinkles nose at you. I know, it's just not a virtue I happen to have. :P
Wow, how to generate ill feeling all around. And I always thought it was Lily snape was crushing on. Just how many people did James get it on with anyway.
It'll be interesting to find out who all Harry's sibs are... though, having most of the older gen as his dad's mates is going to cut down on Harry's grazing grounds quite a bit... also having seven siblings scattered about Hogwarts... are they all at Hogwarts? Harry would be the youngest, yeah?
person Scipia
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! Sev getting it on with James is fantastic!