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for Chameleon's Song

by SomethingElse

person butterpie
schedule August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Looking very good as you continue to add more folks to this rather mixed bag of possibilites. Some sound so needy, while others seem determined not to give in to Harry's allure, oh well. How about djinn, unicorn or dragon next? Also wasn't Marcus Flint once hinted at as having troll blood, so how about him? I'd also really like to see if you could add Cho or Ginny next, if at all possible. Dean could be another choice who's more like Harry's mum with pure human status, but as a friend (or more) as it's your call. So let's see what you choose. Anywho well done!
person Anon
schedule August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
anon again, I would like to see more people come to Harry( oliver ^_^)

but I do have a few species that might be interesting!
Manticore, like a chimera , but tail is scorpion.
Dryad
Lamia
merrow! it's a mermaid type that can remove it's 'skin' it is believed that they become slaves if his/her skin is stolen!

also, the name is mew
person kit
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
the only thing i didnt quite understand was the dream i mean it seemed to fit. but.....i know you said something about it not having that much hemione in it but i think she is enough of a dom for her to be harry's "pure human" so you would make a new thing (srry couldnt spell it). oh and i think it would be fun if you had a giant in the mix.
person kit
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh and one more thing i thing a harry fawlks thing would be interesting since it was said to be rare.
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
okay, i;m mild confusion here. Are the ones in the medi wing potential mates, sibs or a mix of both? And did they just get their critter half forcibly wakened... if so, maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan does dumbles have a lot to answer for.
person bill560682
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
now it may just be me but it sounds like you are threwing out the idea that this might just also become a harry/lily fic as well. an no i am not against the idea seeing as that is one pairing that is very rarely ever done, so i say go for it. an before anyone goes eeeewwww that is sick think about all the other pairings that are done on this site? harry/voldimore who is old enough to be harry's grandfather, harry/james who IS harry's father, harry/patunai who IS harry's aunt, harry/sirius who is harry's godfather, harry/remus who is harry's uncle, harry/snape who is old enough to be harry's father, also those about harry having sex with his own children or his godson teddy or him having sex with the children of his friends such as the several about harry and draco's son.
person bill560682
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
now as far as the talk about goblins, house elves and centures there is an easy way to pull that off,proffessor flitchwick is thought by many an author on this site as well as other sites to be part goblin so if he had a grandchild they would be part goblin as well.

also as far as muggleborns go how many of those muggleborns are due to a wizard like malfoy sr. raping a muggle then wiping thier memory of the event. it is varry likely that at least several muggleborn students are the result of deatheater parties that got broken up by aurors before the women were kill and the ministry wiped thier memories of the event. an since muggleborns are never told of things like this they never go to the bank to have thier bloodlines checked.
person butterpie
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This sure seems like a version of "The Bachelor", what with all these dosed students gearing up to stake a claim on 'poor oL Harry'-lol! Draco seemed to be more of an observer than a contenter here despite Blaize and Seamus'obviously excited state of mind. Still what's up with Terry since he's Harry's brother through Remus and Pansy's his sister through Sirus. Mayhap you plan for some other pairings besides Harry's, hmmm? Interesting, very interesting- you got me hooked so carry on.
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
can i comment on the chappie anyway?
Dumbles what the hells are you thinking, seriously. people are experiment material or bloody chess pieces!
person bill560682
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ah but what you seem to not to take into account as far as collin and dennis go is where did the magic in thier family come from in the first place. i like to think that muggleborns are infact the decendants of disowned squibs, an if you get enough squibs in the same family line you end up with a muggleborn. think about it if you were kicked you of the country of china because you only had 2 arms and everyone else in china had 4 arms you would go live with the other 2 armed people an try to forget all about the country of china. so yes it is possible for the creevey brothers to have blood from several different families running threw thier vaines. it is very likely that they may even have very diluted werewolf blood in thier vaines. seeing as werewolves would be treated much better in the muggle world then in the magical world as long as thier illness was not found out. all a werewolf would need to do was to claim to be a member of a group that pays tribute to diana goddess of the moon and thereby needs to take the day before the full moon the day of the full moon and the day after the full moon off an that he or she can work any other days or shifts in cluding weekends to make up for it. now since most people do not want to work night shift or weekends then the boss would see this as a great way to fill those spots.