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by danniperson

schedule January 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was so engrossing. More please. Lol I love how you are keeping up with the original plot too. Please add me to your mailing list
schedule April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! That was so awesome. Oh my God! You made me laugh and you made me cry and you are torturing me with suspense leaving that cliffhanger - after Ron's death I make no assumptions on who will die next. Please update soon!!!
schedule March 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow good update. I wonder what Severus will say cuz of Harrys' rape? Hope he's angry at Lucius and not Harry. Update again soon please. Soon.
person Sashi
schedule March 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited when I saw the update, I was starting to bring myself to accept the fact that you had abandoned this story! I spent the last twenty minutes creating a new mail and account (I forgot my password) to tell you just how excited I was, so yeah, now that I've calmed down I'm going to read it xD Oh, and I don't think I mentioned it before, but I'm portuguese, so I'm sorry if sometimes I spell something wrong
person Sashi
schedule March 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
okay,so.. the rape scene was revolting. I know there was a warning but I still was kind of shocked. Even if it's a bad feeling, it's good to find a fanfiction that makes me feel something. Your writing makes me feel like I'm there, it makes the story seem so real. You are, without a doubt, the best fanfiction author I've ever found, and I've been reading fanfics for some years now. I'm sorry this review doesn't sound as happy as the other ones, but the chapter wasn't exactly happy, either.
I kept hoping it was not going to be a cliff hanger, but I guess you enjoy torturing your readers :( please update soon, I don't think I was ever this addicted to a fanfic! well, I'm quite addicted to Resistance, too
person Leania07
schedule February 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
O.o oh woah! Having to keep emotions, stomach, and possibly mental stability in check after seeing a scene like that had to be harsh on Sev. I don't know if torture would be right for the Carrows, they might enjoy it too much. Nice chapter, sucks that Harry and Sev didn't get to say 'bye but that's the way it has to be for now. I await the next chapter!

Leania
person Leania07
schedule January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh nicely done, I was wondering how you would go about that scene. I wonder if the Carrows will be Crucio'd...hope they will. Killing a student in school, granted their heartless enough for it, but surely Voldie would recognize how even more people may take up the cause against him. Can't wait for more, wonderful job so far.

Leania
schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting having Sev stand in for Ron's roll in this. A clever manipulation of the story line. ^^
schedule December 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It probably will yes.
Winces. poor sev, there's no easy way to deal with this. Thing is though, if they start killing students, the rest won't come back.
that's utterly nuts though. How can you learn a lesson if your dead. all that's going to do is make the other students scared and angry.
schedule November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
harder and harder on all of them huh. the students really need to get the new da up and running asap.
your brilliant with this btw. an epic writer indeed.