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schedule
August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great story so far, but you might want to check this chapter (chapter 5, I think), it is a bit too wide for the page in some areas.
Cosmyk
Cosmyk
schedule
August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I so love the idea of a soul-bonded Hermione/Snape. I hope you keep going and finish this story. So many good ones never get finished.
Cosmyk
Cosmyk
schedule
August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Im still confused as to what ron did. But i love the updates. I like that your hermione has flaws. Its annoying to read about perfection all the time! It makes the story easy to relate too. Cant wait for sev and hermione to grow closer. Please keep updates coming your doing a a great job
schedule
August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the story! With the exception of the occasional grammatical error or word misuse, you write wonderfully as well. Keep up the fabulous the work! I look forward to reading every day. :) My only "criticism" is the chapters are far too short! You're cultivating a great story that I would love to spend more time in when I read each update!! ;)
schedule
August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Can't wait to read how the story will develop!
schedule
August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! I'm looking forward to the reaction when they're found in bed together lol
schedule
August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You do realise Hermione turned 17 in the sixth book, not the seventh right?
schedule
August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really very good. A few spelling mistakes and you still have her a year to young, but very good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. And the one after that, lol.
schedule
August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
First of all im in love with this. So many times i laughed out loud and blushed to myself. Please email me! Id love to support you while you finish this story! What happened to ron that he got in trouble? Did i miss something? Please give us more hermion x severus! This is great i love the reading each others minds! Oh how i would love for hermione to read a smutty romance novel while snapes having to control him self as he hears her reading it in her head! Muahahaha xoxoxo
Pammy
Pammy
schedule
August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love the story so far! i love how it happened & i love how they have reacted so far as well. i very much look forward to what you have planned for this story!
i do have one question though what happened in between ron & hermione that you did not post yet i do hope that you will tell us what happened cause i was confused at the beginning of this chapter cause she came to stay but you did tell us exatly what, so i hope that makes sense.
i do hope that you will be posting regularly i am so very looking forward to the next chapter!! :)
i do have one question though what happened in between ron & hermione that you did not post yet i do hope that you will tell us what happened cause i was confused at the beginning of this chapter cause she came to stay but you did tell us exatly what, so i hope that makes sense.
i do hope that you will be posting regularly i am so very looking forward to the next chapter!! :)