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for I Learned the Truth at Seventeen

by Greeneyes

person Alyssa
schedule January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story!!
person hermionefan28
schedule November 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so that exploding potion of Longbottoms in chapter one has nothing AT ALL to do with the soul bonding coming about???
person hermionefan28
schedule November 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hermione closed her eyes and moved closer to Severus, he wrapped his arm around her back and leaned down and placed a chase kiss on her head.

Hermione Granger, you are a reason to continue living.

did hermione hear him when he thought this? Hermione Granger, you are a reason to continue living.
also so much for her staying the night in severus rooms!!!
person hermionefan28
schedule November 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
'I do.' He said pulling Hermione to him and wrapping his arms around her toned body.

i thought the reason hermione was embarresed by her body was because she wasnt toned as it was said in the other chapters in THIS story, look back over the other chapters of this story and you will see what i meaan!!!!!
person hermionefan28
schedule November 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
'I want to make you happy Hermione if children make you happy then if I am able to give them to you I will happily have children with you.' He said

Nothing else was said for the next few hours as Hermione attached herself to his lips making it rather hard for him not to turn them over and take her.


okey so he wont only have children to make her happy?? what about him does HE want children??? and children with her???

and i thought hermione wasnt allowed to see her parents at severus house yet and that she could only write them letters and they write letter back to her but yet it said that severus is taking hermione to see her parents at severus house even though she isnt allowed to do so!!!!! WHY is she all of a sudden allowed now to go to severus house and see her parents???? what changed???


also does the ministery of magic know severus and hermione are soul mates???
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so even if the accident didnt happen in potions they would have still be bonded when she turned 17 years old?? because hermione made out as if it was the potions fault!!!!
person hermionefan28
schedule November 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
is Phoenix a girl or a boy because it first said she was a girl and now its says he is a boy!!! what gives???? it cant be both!!!!!!
person hermionefan28
schedule November 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The War would change many things. People will die; it's War, that's what happens. He doubted he would survive. When the Dark Lord finds out that he is a spy for Albus Dumbledore he was sure he would be killed right there and then.

If he was killed, Hermione would be in danger of dying herself. He needed to find a way of breaking the connection. If it meant Hermione surviving the War then breaking the connection safely then it had to be done.

He knew if he went to Hermione and told her he was breaking the bond she would be devastated. He knew that. However keeping her safe and alive was his number one priority.

Severus stood up and walked into his office and opened the draw to his private desk and picked out a small black box.

He opened the box slowly and started at the inside.

Maybe He thought.

maybe what???

also if he broke the boned will he still want to be with her ether way?? and if he broke the boned and he lived will he be able to reboned them like that again as soul mates??
person hermionefan28
schedule November 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
EWWW RON WAS NAKED ON THOSE SHEETS!!! CHANGE THE SHEETS BEFORE SEVERUS AND HERMIONE LIE ON THEM!!!!!!!!!!!! hermione and severus are engared??? fiancie he called her!!!
person hermionefan28
schedule November 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
where is phonix? who was meant to protect her while severus isnt there!!!! why didnt phonix attack ron when Phonix saw Ron naked on his mistress bed??? he should have done and eaten Rons penis and balls!!!!