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February 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story. Please continue it! I hope you will still update.
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August 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I've reviewed this story already but let me just say, I really appreciate the effort you've put in intertwining your story with the original. You've really done a fantastic job at it and it just makes it so much more believable and immersing. On the other hand, it also makes me sad about what will come of Draco and Hermione's relationship :( I don't know if I want you to deviate to a happy end for them D: So torn! Whatever you do, I'm so looking forward to your updates.
Peace and love!
Peace and love!
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August 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What they're doing is so risky but the sex is so hot! Great opening chapters to build tension and desire between them.
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August 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Agony, total an utter dread.
You describe the emotions to a tee. J.K. Only focussed on Harry, and yes this story is set between the lines, but your description of everyone's emotions sheer brilliance.
Keep it up!
You describe the emotions to a tee. J.K. Only focussed on Harry, and yes this story is set between the lines, but your description of everyone's emotions sheer brilliance.
Keep it up!
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August 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You created an intense and emotional scene.Draco's confession of his early hatred of Muggleborns was powerful and then his description of how his thoughts and feelings evolved was gut-wrenching. So much for two who are so young to deal with.
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August 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
They're having a lot of sex but there's been no mention of a contraceptive charm. I hope they aren't being really foolish and taking huge chances that she'll get pregnant. Upcoming war is enough stress and worry without a pregnancy on top of it.
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August 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is so sad. But didn't Draco say he couldn't be sure who they were? It was only when Bellatrix saw the sword that she singled out Hermione, right? Anyway, this is an awful mess and Ron is not a good rebound guy for Hermione if that is what she has in mind. This is a beautifully written story, closely woven into canon. Keep writing! I am so eager to see what will happen next.
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August 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So freaking sad!!!!!
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July 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ow, bittersweet....
Beautifully written I can feel the darkness coming...
Beautifully written I can feel the darkness coming...
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July 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I Love the Original Books, bought this one the day it came out finishing it the morning after, so thanks for refreshing our memories.
You do a fine job threading around it's edges.
You do a fine job threading around it's edges.