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November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your stories. I do wonder about the logic in this one. The supervisor took Harry to task for not connecting the cases, but he did. The story seemed to take only a few days, and after the second attack Harry did start looking at the players' connections. At worst he took a day longer than he should to really start digging, but he can't be faulted for not immediately figuring out the Healer was a strange twisted who didn't fit the normal profile. Could it be that his supervisor is still compromised?
This of course leads to a bigger problem. Shouldn't the next move be for Harry to put his memories of Blue Eyes into a pensieve and show them to other aurors? Maybe Harry doesn't get much respect, but his superiors must not think he is flat out insane or dishonest, else they would find somewhere else for him where he couldn't do much damage. I would think that the fact their supervisor was possessed, even for just a moment, would be a pretty urgent matter. Harry could claim that he wasn't sure about the possession until later encounters with Blue Eyes, but now that the crisis with Alto is ended, what excuse do they have not to do everything in their power to alert the Ministry of this danger?
This of course leads to a bigger problem. Shouldn't the next move be for Harry to put his memories of Blue Eyes into a pensieve and show them to other aurors? Maybe Harry doesn't get much respect, but his superiors must not think he is flat out insane or dishonest, else they would find somewhere else for him where he couldn't do much damage. I would think that the fact their supervisor was possessed, even for just a moment, would be a pretty urgent matter. Harry could claim that he wasn't sure about the possession until later encounters with Blue Eyes, but now that the crisis with Alto is ended, what excuse do they have not to do everything in their power to alert the Ministry of this danger?
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October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
bleeding scorching hell, it took them long enough! I mean, damn, one round with a troll and he and Mio were besties, but draco has had to save his life (and vice versa) how many times? Still, Har was well jaded by this point.
At any rate, i look forward to future installments in this series... should be interesting to see them actually work torgether for a change. :P
At any rate, i look forward to future installments in this series... should be interesting to see them actually work torgether for a change. :P
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October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about the end...
That was a good ending...and beginning for them.
That was a good ending...and beginning for them.
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October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so, she didn't know. not to much of a surprise i suppose. The fact that Har managed to drag Drac back from the brink was though.
interesting, i wonder who one earth it could be and if he knows har very well. It's almost Dumbledore ish, whatever it is.
interesting, i wonder who one earth it could be and if he knows har very well. It's almost Dumbledore ish, whatever it is.
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October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the list!
I saw it and now I've read them all up untill here!
This series makes me think of the running to paradise trilogie I think it was with the black and red hate magic. Kind of, but it's a good thing for sure ;)
Curious about this blue eyed person too.
cheers
I saw it and now I've read them all up untill here!
This series makes me think of the running to paradise trilogie I think it was with the black and red hate magic. Kind of, but it's a good thing for sure ;)
Curious about this blue eyed person too.
cheers
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October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #9...
You know, I almost feel sorry for the girl...ALMOST, now I must
try to get drunk to forget I said that.
So, what happens now? Is this the end or you haven't even touched
on the juicy bits yet? :-)
You know, I almost feel sorry for the girl...ALMOST, now I must
try to get drunk to forget I said that.
So, what happens now? Is this the end or you haven't even touched
on the juicy bits yet? :-)
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October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #8...
1. I KNEEEW it! I had a feeling in the the back of my mind
that she might be a twisted of some sort, but I wasn't sure
how she did it to say it. Personally, I think it could be
by touch....or something.
NOW, we can kill the 'bee-itch'!
2.
1. I KNEEEW it! I had a feeling in the the back of my mind
that she might be a twisted of some sort, but I wasn't sure
how she did it to say it. Personally, I think it could be
by touch....or something.
NOW, we can kill the 'bee-itch'!
2.
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October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,
I'm confused about the order of the cloak and dagger series, and teh fics that are in them.
Could you perhaps post the order on your homepage or somewhere?
Sorry that I misused the review place but it seemed the easiest way to contact.
many thanks
I'm confused about the order of the cloak and dagger series, and teh fics that are in them.
Could you perhaps post the order on your homepage or somewhere?
Sorry that I misused the review place but it seemed the easiest way to contact.
many thanks
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September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy balls Draco lost it. Also...sweet I love jackals and I'm not sure why lol. This is indeed becoming interesting. It's like anyone that gets too close to Miranda or spends too much time becomes a twisted.
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September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #7...
*groans* Aww man, the woman is a disease, right?
Get close and you wind up contaminated.
...and what unlucky number were you implying? Two,
cause it couldn't be thirteen.
Oh, and by the way, you have a VERY good story here,
with a character more irritating than a rash. :-)
*groans* Aww man, the woman is a disease, right?
Get close and you wind up contaminated.
...and what unlucky number were you implying? Two,
cause it couldn't be thirteen.
Oh, and by the way, you have a VERY good story here,
with a character more irritating than a rash. :-)