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I really do hope you add more to this story because it is so sweet and engaging. Amy aka Mione should either get with Blaise or Nott ;)

This is an interesting story! Hope you update soon.

can you explain to me please why you chose harry to be a prick to amy in this story rather then ron whos family hates his family and why in this chapter you had amy make harry leave when in other chapters she wants to talk to him and wants his support to do that she has to talk to him but when he finaly dose come to talk she dosen;t want to even though you make it seem like she dose from her reaction to him please help me
understand this thank you

Oh, Harry needs to get over himself although it is kind of sad that he is not accepting something that Hermione has no control over either way. Love this story still. p

Good chapter, glad she finally got her glamour reversed. Can't wait to see who the mystery guest is!

Not to sound mean or anything but Hermione could surely understand how being Lucius daughter would hurt him, Harry. After all Lucius supported a man that killed his parents, leaving Harry with relatives that hated him, and she got both sets of parents and even a brother. Please dont take it the wrong way cause I love ur story.

I am enjoying this story...I can't wait to see what happens next...I think Harry is going to be walking into the snake pit with some griffindor backup....i hope he pulls his head out soon but if he doesn't it will make it all the more interesting...i wonder who out of Theo and Blaise will vie for the attention of Amy, i know Ron will put up a good fight but I just don't see him winning her in the end...

I am always excited to see an update on this story. I am surprised that Ron did not make any comments and was looking to see how Grangers responded to her change in looks and name. And Draco's buds are going to putting Draco on guard duty to protect his hot new sister, who will surely end up with Ginny enjoying showing her how to showcase her new self. Love it. p

hello write like a busy bee cause this story is jumpin sooooo more chappies please.

You're welcome.

I didn't see the 'barren' curse coming. I wonder who will help her lift the curse and what will be needed to do it? It's nice that she's settling in with Malfoys. How long before they start at Hogwarts?

Hermione's and Draco's personalities are quite flat. They each have fiery personalities, which are completely lost in this story. Your Draco and Hermione come across as meek, and there's something off with their characterizations. I've read them OOC before but this is more than that, it's as if they are on the page but not apart of the story which at times makes the story a tad blah.

I'm sorry that this is a tad harsh, but no matter how interesting the plot is, the characters have to have a strong presence. I'm still improving as a writer, so I know that it's not an easy task, but a little prep work ( making character profiles) will help you to discover who they are and bring that out more. The character should always move the story, not the plot.