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by Ataraxia

schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very hot and erotic. I love your style. I don't read slash so I haven't come across your work before. I might have to sample Snape/Harry. I suppose it might just depend how it's written before I decide if I like it or not. HG/SS is my all time favorite.
schedule August 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!!! So intense!!! Kinda sad that its done though :( but hey every good thing must come to an end though. But I enjoyed at as it lasted!!
schedule August 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh the cliches! Gah! Don't say I never taught you anything? HAH! Though it was delicious. And the little spanking sunburn was lovely. Oh how absolutely delicious. Well delivered. And her eagerness to be taught. So utterly fantastic. Excellent job wrapping it up.
~CryingCinderella
schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
With just that last word I just HAVE to read the next chapter! Update soon please!!!
schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh! What an evil cliffhanger! ~_^ Can't wait for more!
schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh I do so enjoy a delicious bit like this- but as he only had time to really massage her shoulders and the back of her neck; and I'm sure the sunburn had managed to coat the back of her legs- I would liked to have seen how when he thrust her back on that couch- those little stings from that sunburn how deliciously torturous that could be. Eager to see what's next. Of course she's clever- you know what's next...please please please let it be a good shag with the over eager professor who's going to perhaps insist on rubbing more salve over those sunburned legs...before indulging her. Can't wait to find out.
schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As lovely as that scene is...it's too soon. Unless this story is a quickie?