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August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter. I can't wait to see how Harry reacts when the two older men starts to seduce him...I hope that'll be a really long and detailed chapter...
hope to see an update soon, cause this is awesome. Love this pairing so much...
hope to see an update soon, cause this is awesome. Love this pairing so much...
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August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say, I love ur story its different and super cute. Keep up!!
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August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The dialogue doesn't quite seem true to the characters, but I still enjoyed the chapter over all.
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August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am Hooked....and anyone who is hooked on a good story...well needless to say I want more. This is brilliant and I can't wait for more and please keep it going please
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August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Harry seems a bit shy. I wonder how Lucius and Severus will get him past that?
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August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story i cant wait to see what happens with he three of them at afternoon tea update soon
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August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please please please seperate your paragraphs(Example below). It looks really bad and is hard to concentrate on the story. Other than that i like the idea so far and can't wait to see how it goes on, lemon next chapter pleeeeassseeee? (since i'm such a good little reviewer?? *puppydog eyes*)
Example:
Paragraph one
Paragraph Two
That is how it should look, with a line between the paragraphs :D Please and thank you!
Example:
Paragraph one
Paragraph Two
That is how it should look, with a line between the paragraphs :D Please and thank you!
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August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nice but curious how this is going to work
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August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like where you are taking this story and it is well written. I look forward to the three of them together.
A few points, the spacing on the site makes it somewhat difficult to read and there are a few mistakes such as names not capitalised and Grimwauld Place which I believe should be Grimmauld Place (hp-lexicon.org). Little things like that make itless smooth a ead, but a great start nonetheless.
Will add this to my bookmarks and anticipate the next chapter.
A few points, the spacing on the site makes it somewhat difficult to read and there are a few mistakes such as names not capitalised and Grimwauld Place which I believe should be Grimmauld Place (hp-lexicon.org). Little things like that make itless smooth a ead, but a great start nonetheless.
Will add this to my bookmarks and anticipate the next chapter.
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August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wondered how Harry could be so easy with his room mate dating a pair of bought and paid for ex friends of Harry. So, if we forget the paid friends thing, does that mean Harry can still lean on them or are they leery of him? I assume dumbles was still a manipulative dick.