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life as an unwitting sex toy huh? Seriously, he'd better hope no one checks... or that he's taught his pet enough to pass muster.

Good update Hawt stuff. Hope more is to come soon.

It's great to see a new chapter, and it's just as awesome as always! I can't wait to see how Harry reacts to his night-time training and just exactly what Draco's spell from the previous chapter will do (If it's Mpreg, it's just another delicious treat!). I will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter. :)

Haven't read chapter 7 yet (on my way out the door), but I did want to reply to your author's not. :D You even considering the possibility of a femslash like this makes me very happy. (F/f never gets enough love in the HP fandom.) Which wonderful little girl would I like? Have to go with our dear Miss Granger. She's bright, but I can see her being overwhelmed by the magical world and she was so vulnerable and alone those first few months at Hogwarts. What terrible mistress? I'm sure Bella would be a popular choice, but I always find her to be too violent and crazy. I'm all for you to continue with your devious Malfoy theme and go with the lovely Narcissa. She's always wanted a little girl, I bet. Or, if it takes place at Hogwarts, what about Professor McGonagall?

And it's totally understandable about the length of time between updates. Should come first. Good luck with your classes! :)

Just finished Chapter 6. Have to agree with other reviewers who say this story is so, so wrong, but it keeps drawing me in. This is a completely manipulative and evil Draco who shows absolutely no remorse as he goes after what he wants. What makes it creepy is he doesn't see anything wrong with what he's doing. I want to say it's good that at least Harry's getting some pleasure out of it, but Draco is just giving the pleasure to further strengthen his bond and make Harry trust him even more.

I always feel slightly guilty for enjoying chan fics, but I'm captivated by this story. I'm enjoying your other story as well, and while it's a different, I love your twist on the dominating dub con of a naive innocent. Have you ever written het or femslash before? I find myself wondering if young Harry was replaced by a young innocent Hermione or even Narcissa/young Hermione. The dynamics would be different, but I'm sure you would make it just as exciting. Apologies for my rambling review!

oh god so wrong... but... so... good... this is actually like the 6th or so time i've read it, i keep having to start it again every time you update coz it's so good...

damn, i seriously hope he's giving him some after care after this. He had a point. For a virgin of his age and size to have cock up him for half the night or more is going to do damage. considering all the work he's put into getting him, he wouldn't want to break his toy just yet. I hope he doesn't plan on knocking him up any time soon. Har's body is still to young and he needs to be trained to Draco's pleasure properly first.

Good update. Hawt stuff. But what happens now? Draco has been reinforcing his memory, right? to make sure Harry doesn't forget? What happens when Harry finds out Draco has been giving him potions?

Hope more is to come soon please.

Ch.6 was awesome, I cant wait for the next parts to come out! I hope you're able to update soon again! ^_^

Yay! An update! I loved this chapter. Was the spell just a mental reinforcement or was it a pregnancy spell since it was done in the stomah area? I love this story and idea far more than I feel I should. But it is so good!