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by TransientTemptation

schedule December 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just started my break from school too! I've been checking for an update and was so happy to see one. Draco continues to be deliciously creepy. He's completely warped Harry. I'm very curious how the visit will turn out. I kind of miss Draco seducing Harry though. I mean, I know he had Harry under his control, but it would be nice to see some of Draco pleasing his Angel again.

Have you given any more thought to the femslash version? You're awesome!
person djaddict
schedule December 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is so incredibly hot!!

I mean wrong! So incredibly wrong.

Oh, who am I kidding - it's smoking!!!!

More?

lol
schedule December 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
'bout time. will his parents want him back sometime soon?
I hope draco's taught the kid some magic... enough to get by inspection anyway.
wouldn't it be boring though, if you know everything your trained pet does?
schedule December 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm lovely chapter and quite the delicious kink! Mind if I ask for one to be added? In an earlier chapter you mentioned this turning out more M/s than you'd originally planned and I don't remember if you asked for our opinions or not so i'll just give mine to you: PLEASE PLEASE DO IT! Nothing better than a Master Draco with a subby Harry. Plus with that whole 'training' bit in here it'd fit right in! But onto my kink that i'd love to be fitted in here, can Draco please please please get Harry a collar? Hmm? Pretty please? Pretty pretty please?
schedule December 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hawt as always. Update again please
schedule October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Harry has no free will at this point. Draco had warped him so much, but Harry remains utterly oblivious. This story can go so many different ways. A total guilty PWP pleasure. A dark tale where Harry remains a sex toy. Revenge, sex, sad ending, hopeful ending.

uses Jedi mind trick ... You will update soon.
person WesleyY7
schedule October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a darkly teasing chapter! Of course, I love Draco being bad, but I got rather hopeful when he took Harry to get his wand. Maybe Harry would find a way out from under Draco's thumb once at Hogwarts. (Not that we want that to happen too soon, of course!) But then, reading Harry's reactions to the dresses and realizing Draco's nighttime teachings are perverting the poor boy, it appears Draco isn't going to let his charge go at all.

That store owner creeped me out! "Still training?" "He's precious." How many other young boys get taken into that store? Does Harry just want to wear the dresses or do they turn him on too? If it's the latter, bad Draco for not giving him release as well! Looking forward to more.
schedule October 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*blinks. wow. short this time out. So, he can use dreams to train Har for any kink... I still wanno\a know what he's gonna do if/when they get checked on.
schedule October 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hawt update. I wonder what is going to happen when Harry finds out the truth. If he finds out I guess I should say. Well thank you for the update, I hope more is to come soon.
schedule October 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell. Came here via a rec in the forum. I thought there were no new ideas for Harry/Draco and here you are with this naughty tale with a wonderful twist. I love the balance between Harry's innocent trust and Draco's manipulative guile. I like my smut very descriptive, so I'm surprised I'm loving this as much as I do. You sex it up in perfect smutty paragraphs. I think it's the mentions of Harry's cluelessness and the way Draco looks at and talks to him that do me in. Anytime he calls him Angel ...love, love, love. That and the potions.

Femslash is so, so neglected, so it would thrill me to see this written with some ladies. (The wandplay alone would be worth it. I can't get enough of a little wide-eyede and innocent Hermione. Narcissa would be a perfect benefactor. Or, in keeping with the same age twist, what about an older and evil Ginny Weasley?

Looking forward to your next update. Don't keep Harry (and us) waiting for too long.