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I don't care if you get a plot or not, that was good. Also, best plots are sometimes the simplest anyway. Harry trying to deal with this is substance enough.

I can't help it. The tentacles are actually better than when Malfoy himself fucks him.

I guess it is rape, but it is at least slightly consensual in that Harry doesn't seem traumatized in a bad way.

Wait, I'm confused?? Is Draco the Father or just another incubus that's willing to get Harry off?? Thanks for another GREAT chapter!

Oh man that works so well.. with Narcissa being the last host for an egg.. from malfoy's father.. after all they say Draco is almost a perfect clone of his father Lucius.

OMG Malfoy?! That is so perfect! And I can so see him doing that too! I can't wait for more, especially now that Harry knows who the incubus is and where he can get more sexy fun.

um another thing i noticed, u use 'moan and writhe' a lot. try look for some other words that mean the same to make the story better. mewl, whimper, gasp etc and tremble, quiver, twitch, shake etc... just some suggestions.

0.o how the heck did he hide that at school?!
snickers at Harry. Yay! more tentacles.
so was dray the one who knocked him up or is he just taking advantage of the sitch? Is his being receptive to pheromones what got dray or who ever thru the wards?
also, with the malfoys, if it was luc who was the incubus why did he keep Cissa around? Why didn't he spawn more off spring and why was he all blah blah rant rant, pure blood? does that mean one of his parents was also a sex demon? Was his marriage to Cissa still arranged?
If Voldi knew he had a sex demon in his pocket, why didnt he use him/her more? (depending on whether it was luc or cissa)

u r update speed has me bouncing happily. Your plot bunnies must be in population explosion. ^^

"The profit"? Do you mean "The Prophet" as in "The Daily Prophet"? Just wondering... anyway, awesome , and very different, story! Can't wait to read more!

damn, Harry is just not catching a break huh. I wonder what Malfoy has planned.
we're going to get more t sex in the future right *looks at you pleadingly. Right?
If a carrier successfully hatches one egg, would an incubus use them again, or spread the word to others of their kind about them?

Could be worse Har. you could be jumped again in the meantime... though since he's already knocked up, what would be the point... unless mr incubus just wants to screw him for his energy. :P

poor harry, left horny and frustrated. so, we won't be getting more tentacle smut for real as the guy seems to have knocked up hiss prize and nicked off. *snaps fingers. damn.
*snickers at Sev and Moony. And the brawled happily ever after...not.