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for Family Means More Than Blood

by WingsofaDream

person BloodTear
schedule June 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I like that Draco and Harry are exploring their relationship a bit! I still hope that Sev walks in on them at one point or another though... Lol I love a bit of father/son conflict/bonding. I'm also sorry I don't get to review every chapter, but I do love your story and it is one that I look forward to being updated. Great job:)
schedule June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

Firstly I just have to say how much I love this story (Its kinda captured me for the past two days as I'v read from something like chapter 12 to the end at 46 so far)

I love Draco as a Luna Veela! Whatever made you come up with that was genius, and Harry and Draco being in Fred and George's year is epic win. I love the entire storyline. And as I was always a fan of Mr Severus Snape I do enjoy the softy side of him you portray.

Keep it up, I can't wait to see the developments in the Triwizard, and between Draco and Harry. I imagine Diggory is going to get more than he bargained for at some point too heheheh :)

Laters, and thanks.
schedule June 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Im lovin this high preist elf dude, so sneaky. And i am loving your story, i knew you must have updated by now but i hadnt gotten a chance to get to it as i've been preparing for my lil' sister's 8th Birthday!! Yay, but back to you, your story is fabulous, and cant wait for the next xhapter, and of cours, for hary and draco to consuminate, or watever, their bond ;)
UPDATE SOON!!
person jill
schedule June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful work~ I've read all the chapters in one sitting. This story is so captivating.
schedule June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
nice to see Gred and Forge running true to form. :P
Ron and lil jonny didn't know har has visions? I thought that was common knowledge now?
I am sooooo glad now one has the gall too suggest Har did it this time out. They all KNOW he'd sooner chop off a leg then place himself in the spot light.
Well, at least the twins believe him. I don't think there'll be any 'support the real hogwarts champ' badges either, since it's dead clear that har is completely unwilling.
Having a high priest and his goddess on side can't hurt either. :P
Oh i hope this goes different from the book. I dun want Ced to get Dead... pouts.
I imagine Voldi will be a bit pissy about har's lack of co operation with his efforts too, though i don't think he'll actively hurt har. Maybe we'll actually get to find out what that b day letter was about. ^^
I'm glad you're hinting at changing the tasks a bit. I mean c'mon. Bloody DRAGONS? What was she thinking. seriously, it's like the author wanted them dead.
I'm very much looking forward to seeing how things go from here.
schedule June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Naw poor Harry, I'm glad he's got so many friends to stand by and support him, it was one of the things that I didn't like about the fourth book - Ron being so fickle in his friendship even though he'd stood by him with the chamber of secrets thing and other things. Harry is a lot more grounded in this and it's because of amazing friends like Fred and George, I was so worried how you'd play that. But if course you go for super awesome sweetness from everyone which I love. You going to change up the tasks a bit? Oh the Yule Ball will be fun :)
schedule June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
For some reason when I think of that elf priest I think of Eowins father (not sure I spelled that right) But I can't wait to see what he has in mind. HOpe things work our for the best. I know Draco and Snape are going to be worried sick. Hope more is to come soon please.
schedule June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
All I really need to say is how much I absolutely love the High Priest. Seriously I think he just made my day with his reaction to Harry being forced to compete and how he will help him. Love the update see you next time!
~Pen
schedule June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter!!!!
person polka dot
schedule June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think Harry is still lying by omission. Not too good at following those HAvantist vows.