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July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aw poor Harry, to get a vision of someone's death and not be able to save them... it's just awful. I did love panicky Harry we don't see him much but gosh he's just as cute as the others :) I've been reading all your stories again, you know - cause I love you, and I'm partway through reading this one again but I had to come and read this chapter and tell you how awesome you are just how beautifully you capture the emotions for your characters they feel so real to me you make me cry with them and laugh with them and it's what I love about books so I'm really glad I've been able to find that in the Fanfiction world, because most of the writers are like me, lazy girls who slew out stories we've all seen before and don't like to have their things proofread. Lol, I'm sure we've established I have no life outside the world of Fanfiction ;) So I'm just really... grateful I suppose, if that's not to weird to say, grateful for you delivering quality stuff week after week. I just wanted you to know that cause most of my reviews are one sentence so I thought you deserved a little more. Oh and I think your Snape and Harry relationship is completely fine, I get that it is a bit different for boys but my brother is what I like to call a Hugger. He's eighteen and he just loves hugs from anyone, there's this lovely Asian lady who works at the supermarket and he hugs her all the time though I've trained him to now ask before hugging random people. My point is even though they're rare there are boys who hug - he hugs my dad all the time so I've never found anything wrong with your HarryxSnape relationship I think it's a very natural thing for a boy with abandonment issues like Harry - there's no explanation for my brother though but anyway.... I'm done so... um loved the chapter as always and I can't wait for the next one!
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July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hiya! Great chapter! And, I love the relationship that Sev and Harry have. Harry grew up in a different situation... He went to school with different people and relies on the love he has with his father to get through life. It's a very strong famial bond. (holy crap I just had a thought....Sev is not going to die is he? Curse Jk for doing that to poor Sev in the first place... Okay not really but I still didn't want Sev to die lol) anyways, I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter... You really are an excellent writer:)
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July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's a good thing Harry doesn't have a mother, because he would be tied to her apron strings.
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July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story!!!! If you were worried about the religion part its no problem to me. The Great Lady kinda sounds like Jesus but at least the religion is logical even when magic is concerned. I wish AFF.net was more user friendly so I could get story updated. I cannot wait until the next chapter is put up. Keep doing what you do best!
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July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love how jealous Draco is! and I love how Harry has his father so wrapped around his little finger. I cant wait to see how you write the next task, and how Draco reacts to being the thing Harry would miss most (probably knew it already so would be privately embarrassed but outwardly confident lol)
Keep up the good work, I love this thing :D
Oh also, Ron being jealous over Hermione subtly is going well, I like that there are small references to it. But of course I love Harry/Draco the most, so that prefects bathroom scene was fun. Harry is so cute ^__^
Keep up the good work, I love this thing :D
Oh also, Ron being jealous over Hermione subtly is going well, I like that there are small references to it. But of course I love Harry/Draco the most, so that prefects bathroom scene was fun. Harry is so cute ^__^
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July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ch. 50 is awesome!!!!!!!!!
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July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story, though it's kind of creepy, like the relationship between Harry and Snape. Its strange. I can't begin to say how strange it is cause no father and son that I know act like lovers, they kind of do and that is what is creepy. And what is bothering me is that Snape can get away with anything and Draco can't. He loves Snape more than his mate? that is, well, sick. I love drarry, I do, but it seems more Harry and Snape than anything, maybe if you tone down the Harry/snape thing, it will be more pleasant but until then, I don't think I can read it. It's just creeping me out, especially since you have Harry standing up for Snape and not Draco. That's unfair.
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July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Have I ever said that I loved Snape as a dad? A thousand times? Well, I'll just repeat once more for emphasis haha I'm loving the sexy times with Draco... and Krum being jealous of Harry. Did the same thing happen in the 4th book? I don't remember.
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July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I still love possessive draco. Love how he covered Harry's body. Cute. Hope more is to come soon. And I'm starting a new job soon. So I'll still try update soon.
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July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh very nice!!!!