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August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this yesterday - I don't know why I didn't start earlier when I saw it but it's amazing. It flows so well and I love that it's the same but so different. Keep up the great work!!!
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August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wahh, these chapters!! Poor Pettigrew, never liked him, but still... Voldemort's power over Harry, how interesting... probably was meant for when Harry was his sex slave huh? He's sweet to him in a sick, twisted, psychopath obsessive way haha Love the plot, sad to hear only a few chapters left though. I'll just have to reread the story til the next chapter. Awesome job >w<
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July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this update. And I couldn't nhelp but knotice the way Riddle called Harry 'love' So Riddle wants Harry in that way? That's very interesting. Wonder what the others will think when and if they find out. Hope more is to come soon please.
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July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
True but then Har's instincts have never been wrong yet regarding the bad guys.
sigh, how many times does it take with Har predicting something disastrous before the adults pick up the point. seriously, sheesh.
Oh, that must have been so hard for har. It's totally against his nature not to go to the aid of someone needing help.
Still, YAY! Ceddy, din get deady. I hope he appreciates that later.
With the port key, would anything touching it trigger it, or does it need to be a living being of some kind?
Hmmmmm. *peers at you snobbishly and pushes up the potter geek glasses up on my nose. I thought it was unwittingly given for the father since he's like, a bone pile and therefore, unknowledgeable about anything. Still, nice substitute for enemy there. Still, what a thoroughly icky side effect. virtual rape with a touch. ewwww.
Of course har can't kill him, pacifist... dah! still, that's going to put a serious crimp in ridding the world of V as the canon approach certainly wouldn't work here.
man, he really doesn't want har to have mind or will of his own, does he. Would har's seer powers be effected by being broken down to being a pet? yuck, what a thought.
Oh, yeah, that's really going endear the guy to har. How does he know when it's just enough to cause pain and not enough to break a mind. rather risky wasn't it? Kinda hypocritical too. no when his to touch/harm har and then he orders him tortured. Is he still missing several chunks of soul in this? I he is it wouldn't surprise me cause damn, does it show.
Well, there's a fine motivational reward for loyal service. Help a guy come back and be rewarded with a quick death. >>. Well, at least he wasn't tortured to death. Poor Pete, he was so scared all the time. At least Har was able to absolve him of guilt in the end. Yay Har, getting an early toe in with his priestly duties. ^^
Har's religion is against self harm and suicide too, yeah? Still, they're frail mortals, and life life with V would be enough to drive anyone to the brink.
Well, that was dead careless of V. Did he honestly expect har to just sit/stay like a good dog? Still, if he ever snags har again after this, you can bet har is going to be immobilized until V gets him home.
man, har just can't go a year without being seriously crunched, can he.
sigh, how many times does it take with Har predicting something disastrous before the adults pick up the point. seriously, sheesh.
Oh, that must have been so hard for har. It's totally against his nature not to go to the aid of someone needing help.
Still, YAY! Ceddy, din get deady. I hope he appreciates that later.
With the port key, would anything touching it trigger it, or does it need to be a living being of some kind?
Hmmmmm. *peers at you snobbishly and pushes up the potter geek glasses up on my nose. I thought it was unwittingly given for the father since he's like, a bone pile and therefore, unknowledgeable about anything. Still, nice substitute for enemy there. Still, what a thoroughly icky side effect. virtual rape with a touch. ewwww.
Of course har can't kill him, pacifist... dah! still, that's going to put a serious crimp in ridding the world of V as the canon approach certainly wouldn't work here.
man, he really doesn't want har to have mind or will of his own, does he. Would har's seer powers be effected by being broken down to being a pet? yuck, what a thought.
Oh, yeah, that's really going endear the guy to har. How does he know when it's just enough to cause pain and not enough to break a mind. rather risky wasn't it? Kinda hypocritical too. no when his to touch/harm har and then he orders him tortured. Is he still missing several chunks of soul in this? I he is it wouldn't surprise me cause damn, does it show.
Well, there's a fine motivational reward for loyal service. Help a guy come back and be rewarded with a quick death. >>. Well, at least he wasn't tortured to death. Poor Pete, he was so scared all the time. At least Har was able to absolve him of guilt in the end. Yay Har, getting an early toe in with his priestly duties. ^^
Har's religion is against self harm and suicide too, yeah? Still, they're frail mortals, and life life with V would be enough to drive anyone to the brink.
Well, that was dead careless of V. Did he honestly expect har to just sit/stay like a good dog? Still, if he ever snags har again after this, you can bet har is going to be immobilized until V gets him home.
man, har just can't go a year without being seriously crunched, can he.
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July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry!! I hope he's okay.
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July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was a very strong chapter, moving and emotionally pulling. I enjoyed it very much.
As to defensive, no, I think we both misunderstood hehe. So thats fine.
My favourite part of this chapter is the way you mix events, like Harry taking back Peter instead of Cedric etc. And I found it hillarious that you gave Voldemort, the dark lord of all evil and the like, the power to give intense pleasure instead of pain to Harry. Was giggling for a while there. hehe.
Great work. :D
As to defensive, no, I think we both misunderstood hehe. So thats fine.
My favourite part of this chapter is the way you mix events, like Harry taking back Peter instead of Cedric etc. And I found it hillarious that you gave Voldemort, the dark lord of all evil and the like, the power to give intense pleasure instead of pain to Harry. Was giggling for a while there. hehe.
Great work. :D
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July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm the same thrnbrooke on ff.net and lots of other places.
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July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oooh its getting more and more interesting as it goes along. Excellent story telling as usual and I cant wait to see what happens next
(Also, my point about not going over the things that had already happened was meant to be a positive thing, I like that you dont rewrite what we know already, so sorry if it came out as a criticism.)
(Also, my point about not going over the things that had already happened was meant to be a positive thing, I like that you dont rewrite what we know already, so sorry if it came out as a criticism.)
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July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read the battle in the grave yard and what will happen. I hope more is to come soon. I love to see Dracos reaction.
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July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Folks need to listen to Harry! Are they nuts? After what they saw with crouch? Great chapter! I am very pleased to know that Sev isn't going to die:) .... And, the more I read the more I hope you wrote on this story for a while yet:):)... Lol it's seriously one of my favorites!