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Wow!!! Loved this chapter, can

well that can't be good for Harry, Severus needs to get them outta there

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Chap. One

aw. I love stories where Severus is either a father or father figure to Harry. And he is so sweet in his own way to him. I think this is the first one I've read where he actually raises him.

I do have a question. I remembered reading this chapter on another site, so I searched a bit, and found where it is in fact posted on your account at ff.net and has been for a few years. I'm not sure why I didn't finish it. I'm a little mad at myself lol. I'll definitely be reading now. I was wondering if you were changing the story at all as you post it here, or if you planned on editing and reposting over there. If you prefer, you can answer me privately at deasejr@gmail.com. Thank you and I look forward to reading more!

LOVING this story! Can't wait for more. I know this isn't the kind of review that makes one's entire day but i'm a lazy git. This feels novel and engaging. There is nothing that comes across as rehashed. I like each of the characters and i'm curious about harry and Severus, harry and Draco, the little white kitten, the seer thing and of course - most of all about Voldemort and how you will cast him. Will he be absolute evil, repulsive, bigotted and debauched - an insane monster hell bent on killing haryon, or will he be the supremely intelligent and manipulative fiend subtly observing his development with avarice and crafting machinations to bring him to the point he requires?! Or something in between? or something entirely different? Looking forward to finding out more!

Please please PLEASE add this on fanfiction so I can received e-mails when you update! Such a great plot here - can't wait for more!

woahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! *does the manga fall over in shock. The potters are still around?! What the bloody hell?! Harry has a sister? What of Nev's parents, are they still about? Does this mean Harry really was abandoned... or was he stolen? Where their memories altered? Oh soooooooooooooooo many possible scenarios. Put me out of my misery. more back story pllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaassssseeeee!
on a less dramatic note, so our little Har's a seer huh, that's a twist.

oh Harry. He makes me so sad. I wish he knew his birth parents hadn't abandoned him... though i suppose hogwarts: a history wouldn't be on his reading list and even if it were, would he even know who his birth parents were? I'm glad he was there for draco though.

Ooh getting spooky. I had a feeling when Harry had the dream Narcissa wouldn't make it. Is he psychic or is it his connection with Voldie? Ah you won't tell me, the suspence is all part of the fun.
I like how you've kept what I feel is anvery important aspect of Harry's personality. The tendency he has to keep things to himself, while the books present it as a sort of stubbornness with a hint of fear your take is a lot more relatable for me. I do the exact same thing when i have a problem and try to fix it myself out of fear of upsetting my family, though I'm not a trash-baby and have no fears of being tossed out on bin night. It's just that desire to keep everyone happy.
Good chapter as always, love your cute little Harry+Draco scene. They're so cute! More cuteness, love the cuteness! Looking forward to next chapter, as I always am XD

Oh no, poor Narcissa and Draco and her family! I wonder what Lucius will do now...
Interesting school Harry is in. And it's nice to see that the students are the same as in any school, including bullies. Particularly among elves, who are usually portrayed as always wise and peaceful in many stories.
Will Harry ever learn who his parents were? Was he really abandoned? Is there a link between him and Voldemort (besides Severus)? Dumbledore's behaviour seems to indicate that Harry will have some role to play in the war against Voldemort... but maybe I'm wrong?