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for Family Means More Than Blood

by WingsofaDream

person Bambi
schedule November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's great to see that even if John is a prick to Harry, at least he can be sweet to Hermione. Maybe the two will turn out to be more similar than they thought =P
schedule November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nicely done. you slotted Har in very neatly there... I wonder. does this mean Mio is going to be friends with Ron and co, Har or all three... and if she's friendly with all three, does this mean Ron, potter and Har will eventually be friendly as well?
person Leania07
schedule November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi, new reviewer here *waves shyly*. I love the story, and your own twist on things; I've been very pleased thus far. However I hate to point out something; uncle Lucius didn't die, it was aunt 'Cissy. Don't know if that was already pointed out, sorry if it was. Don't know if there's a way to change it now that its already posted *shrug* but I still wanted to let you know. Can't wait to read more, especially to see how Draco will continue to show his attraction to a confused Hayron. (Did I spell that right?) <3 Leania
schedule November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw Harry was so sweet to Hermione. I wish someone had been that nice when I first started school as a friendless nobody. I'm so glad you've got Harry to be more honest with his father, they both really need it. Oh and your line about Harry using his staff to make the High Priests cat fall asleep made me laugh. I'm pretty sure the cat was just being a cat and simply fell asleep. Oh and Potter! Grr he just annoys me, I hope Ron and Hermione mellow him out or at least get him to stop being so bratty. A wonderful chapter and I can't wait for your update!!
schedule November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw Draco. What a beautiful way to declare your feelings and Harry is totally clueless. Looking forward to your update.
schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter here! I really hope you write a confrontation between Harry and *whatshisname* Potter lol. That'd make my day!

Only one spelling blip that I caught here: ["You can't except [EXPECT] us to remember to do that." Fred protested.] just switch the two letters!

Anyways, great work here, can't wait for the next update!
schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
poor draco, lol. It must be hard to be so smitten and adding the beginning of puberty on top of that, draco almost wouldn't know what to do with himself.
I'm glad Nev and mio have had a so far, relatively painless introduction.
Yay for almost spoilers... *bounces happily.
schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have had to do some catch up reading, but now that I have, I love this story. Its different than many fan fics that I have read in the past. I also loved in this chapter how Draco's feelings for Harry shine through, even if Harry doesn't recognize them. Until next time :D
person Bambi
schedule November 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww, more family drama... I hope you go more into why Lily abandoned poor Harry, though I have a vague idea why. But most importantly, Draco realizes his feelings!! YAYYYYY!! Great job on the chapter, had to reread three times before I could review <3
schedule November 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw, hurray for cuteness. Oh and Potter is a tool. I hate snooty kids like that.
The plot thickens. Harry's scar and Professor Quirrell... Will you be vaguely following the books? If so then I greatly look forward to your versions filled with DracoxHarry cuteness. Starting to really adore your SnapexHarry fatherxson moments to, God Harry is just so ute with everyone. Affectionate Harry is my favourite Harry. I will go fan girl squee about adorable things in the corner. Hurray!!! - sorry a little goofy today - hurray!!!! Lalalalalalalalala........