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So far this last chapter has been my favorite. I really don't like the cocky Potter boy. I hope is Harry had grown up with James and Lily, this is not how he would turn out. Brat. But he grew up with Snape so he's the sweetest, most caring boy ever!! Love it.

Ok, first of all, it was not that I was not enjoying your story, I was just commenting on a few things and speculating. I also was just curious as to the timing of the romance, not that that is the only reason I was reading this story. But thanks for the sarcasm, it's always welcomed. I very much enjoy the writing and I reread my review to make sure that it did not sound so displeasing and I don't think it did. I really don't understand why you would get so defensive with one of your readers, not exactly a good way to keep them reading and recommending your work.
But aside from your displeasure at my review, I think this story is good. I think the writing style is consecutive and the editing it pretty clean. The story line is entertaining and not moving too quickly or too slowly. Your new chapters are always ones I look forward to reading. The only thing I would recommend is don't freak out at your readers reviews, especially when they are not negative and Especially when they are taking the time to review your story.

Huh. So when Jon gets to be a third year and uses that blood parchment thing, he's in for a surprise huh? haha And I'm wondering, will Harry still be the main hero like in the books, like go through to the mirror in the end, go to the chamber of secrets, etc.

Awesome update here - can't wait for Jonathan Potter to get a rude wake up call lol. And Merry Christmas to you as well Wings!

in-ter-esting! Will Har be dragged into the whole phi stone fiasco... he'd have to be if they want to beat mouldy shorts. i like the priests explanation for what the mirror showed but i wonder if part of it was horcrux induced. is there a prophesy this time round? though he doesn't have his mothers protection in this one.

and a very merry x to u to. ours will probably be small and quiet.

This is confusing. I wonder how you are going to dispel all of this stuff about John? Kind of a bummer Harry is no longer a part of all the cool stuff from the books. I am interested in this story, but also can't wait for Draco to start his stuff with Harry. :)

Poor Harry! Always poor Harry - why you be so mean to him? Naah it makes for good plot. I'm glad you soothed his worries about the mirror. Then you gave him more worries - oh and of course glad you got Fred and George working against Potter.
Oh and the bloodline thing, will we ever find out Harry's true parentage? Is it important? It's nice he's so loyal to Snape but my curiosity would have killed me by now. Another great chapter and a very Merry Christmas to you!

I really am enjoying this story. I particularly like Draco in this chapter; he's so upset and Harry doesn't really see why. Great writing!

I really like this entire story. I hope to see an update soon, do you usually update on a certain day?

Hello again!! Thanks for the update, I'm loving how you twist all these details and make them your own =3
And I'm wondering, will this be a creature fic? Just the way Draco was acting... with his trip to Austria...
Anyways... great job and have a Merry Christmas!! (In case you don't update again before Christmas)