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January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying the interactions between jealous Bethany and Harry! They're hilarious. I just feel that she's going to do something bad to Harry soon though...
Good chapter!
Good chapter!
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January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh that makes me want to watch the movie again. hehehe
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January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter ^.^ Oh and don't worry about it, I can't talk back to my parents and I'm almost 30. So Harry is just starting to be clued in hmm? I also like how you made John Potter the one with the broken wand and regurgitating slugs. He really is a little snot; LOL. Can't wait for more, just curious how many more chapters is there, or are you just writing them as you can?
Leania
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January 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aw! I'm glad Harry stood up for what he thinks is right, 'baby steps' though like you said, super proud of him though!
I love how you use the story but the same and not the same, I was wondering who'd find the diary or how it'd become involved. It's always fun to see how you do that. I wonder who stole it, I'm assuming that it was not simply a figment of his imagination although you made it seem like it with the magic shopkeeper and the vanishing diary. I am sort of hoping Ginny took it but it'd be interesting if it were someone else. Can't wait for your update!
I love how you use the story but the same and not the same, I was wondering who'd find the diary or how it'd become involved. It's always fun to see how you do that. I wonder who stole it, I'm assuming that it was not simply a figment of his imagination although you made it seem like it with the magic shopkeeper and the vanishing diary. I am sort of hoping Ginny took it but it'd be interesting if it were someone else. Can't wait for your update!
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January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really love the way you sort of rewrite the original but with such twists that its soo very much your own.. Love it!!!! cant wait for 25 to find out how that diary came up missing...
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January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter ^.^ Woohoo! Go Harry, hard thing to do, telling off parents/guardians, great to see he's not a pushover. I await the next chapter.
Leania
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January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I kinda want Draco to end up with the diary, I think if Ginny had it then Harry wouldnt care that much to go save her
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January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter here! I loved how it ended on a positive note, yet I feel like the other shoe is just waiting to drop...perhaps James Potter or Sirius will do/say something that will cause Lucius or Severus to hex them lol. Can't wait for more from ya!
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January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was an awesome bit of tweaking. I wondered if you were going to included the diary and how it was going to get where it needed too. So how come Har didn't sense the bad juju com8ing off it? Or is it inert until activated? Did it end up with Gin again and if so how so?
I look forward to the next instalment. ^^
I look forward to the next instalment. ^^
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January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that you have Harry still participating in the events from the books! Yay!!! Excited about seeing how you wind him into future events.