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for Family Means More Than Blood

by WingsofaDream

schedule February 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was intense. Good stuff. I wonder what his father will say when he learns harry was in the chamber of secrets. Hope more is to come soon please.
person Leania07
schedule February 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, so no phoenix tears this time. Another wonderful chapter, and I must admit, I chuckled when Harry threw the sword away from him and then wiped his hand off. I could almost hear in my head 'Oh eww!' Keep up the good work, I await the next!

Leania
schedule February 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
We all suspect Ginny because we all secretly hate her. A wonderful chapter, I like that Harry stuck to his vow, I didn't realize he wasn't allowed to hurt giant big ass snakes that were trying to kill him. But I'm glad Ron got to have his hero moment, it's nice for him. Oh and Voldemort - creepy. I mean like REALLY creepy. -shudders- It'll be interesting to see where you go with that too! Can't wait for the conclusion of book two and the start of book three, it's my favourite and I know you'll do it just as awesomely as you did the first two!!
person Leania07
schedule February 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh I finally got caught up and yay! Okay, another wonderful chapter! Poor Harry feeling lost and confused, even doubting his faith. Reassuring to know that even the High Priest admits to others having doubts at one point or another. How odd for little John Potter to ask if Harry was mentally stable enough to be picked on and ridiculed, LOL! So the boy has a bit of a conscious hmm? I do wish Harry would confide in his father at the very least...eventually Sev will need to figure out and address little Harry's insecurities about being abandoned. I don't see Draco and Harry getting together otherwise (in my opinion at least); Harry will always believe the people he loves will abandon him until its addressed. But how will he figure it out...Ohh, I can't wait for more. ^.^ Hanging on and waiting!

Leania
schedule February 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whoa another awesome chapter. It took me a while to work out 'update member' thing the site was doing but here I am all updated and able to review from my account, just so you know it's really me. I'm sure that matters a lot to you ;) First a random guess for the diary wielder - it's gotta be Ginny, you kept telling people it wasn't but you've made her all suspicious and you're making Harry notice that - unless your being double clever and doing that to throw us off the real trail - wow you're a crafty lass. A very happy birthday to Fred and George, that was a very sweet section, I love when you've got sweetness and I love those two. They're coming to Australia so I'm getting my fan-girl on now.
Aw and Hermione just with Harry trying to save her - I mean it was sad in the books when it happened but I was shattered even though I knew it was coming because all the victims are the same. Oh and I appreciate Harry's approach to the Draco problem hadling it the simplist way possible: ignoring it. Very much my philosophy in life. Can't wait for your update!!
schedule February 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good update. I love the fact the Severus is so protective of his son. Who knew he could feel. LOL But I hope you update again soon and don't worry. You could never disappoint. :)
person under draco
schedule February 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like how Harry chooses to ignore that Draco likes him. I'm so glad nothing changed between Harry and Johnathan, but I have a feeling when Jonanthan finds out his whole world's going to change. I was really hopeing Harry would get to Hermione in time to save her. Thanks for the update.
schedule February 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am soooo sorry I haven't reviewed in a long while. I have been without the internet but I have been reading on my phone, but with such a small keyboard, I wasn't confident in my reviewing abality... I must say, I do love your twists!! This has to be the best Harry I have read in a while. Others are mainly focusing on the nature of the main characters' relationships, but here, I just see never ending plotline and I LOVEE ITT!!! Until next week with the continuation of CoS..
person polka dot
schedule February 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, I wonder how Potter will fit into Ginny's rescue
schedule February 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Har.
"It's always darkest, before the da-wn,
don't be discouraged, just carry on,
He'll (or in har's case She'll) not forsake you, the sun will break through,
It's always darkest, before the dawn"

Poor har, everything does seem rather gloom and doom atm huh? whose taken over as head person? Minny?
I wondered how he was going to learn the heirs identity. i don't think har would be very happy knowing the killer snake considers him Voldi's. Will Aragog feature? Will he get his hands on that diary again? oh so many events to shuffle around and play with. ^^

ty for the good wishes. The leg thing is annoying the cackie out of me. I keep thinking, 'surly i'm over exaggerating and it's not as bad as all that" and then i try and walk and wince and cringe and think 'oh yes it bloody is!" I'm just so tired of it! grrrrrrr!
ah well, on the plus side, it does leave me lots of time for fan fics, reading and re viewing. ^^