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I sooooo need more!!!! Draco is going to lose Harry before he can even court him. Sooo sad really.

Good update. I was sooo sure they would kiss. You can tell Draco wasn't happy. HOpe more is to come soon, and a kiss at least. LOL

wow, har's first hard core argument with his da. that's a milestone... though i hope he does apologize since in this instance he was wrong.
nope, i'm sorry, lil pete just isn't scary. now, red eyes, he's one scary physcho (i woulda called him a mo fo except that he would touch her with a shielded barge pole. :S)
So har is developing other psi abilities along with foresight. interesting, i wonder what else he'll get. Just how many extra's go along with the high priest gig?
Is there a reason har hasn't mentioned draco's veela to be ish ness to anyone? Does Draco even know his heritage. I think it's pretty much a give he's har's mate, which is going to put him on Moldi's hit list hard core... as if he wasn't already in a 'target in passing since his da's a traitor' kind of way. Is there a reason young Vi is baiting draco? come to think of it, why is har taking miss utterly nutters word for it? Like she doesn't have reason to lie through her teeth. She'd better hope that Draco never finds out about that or he'll be wearing her decorated skin to her funeral.

I think Violet may have the hots for her brother. how gross.

Oh tough times hmm? Don't suppose Sevy really though about the way he said that hmm, though to give the man credit, he isn't really aware of Harry's abandonment issues. He didn't act much like I thought he would when Sev said he 'didn't care...' and then walked/stalked away. Another wonderful chapter, keep up the good work!

Leania

I feel soo sad for Harry for several reasons. This chapter has a lot going on for him.. To be told that your best friend has a thing for you, and you even see it yourself, and then to find out that he has been whoring himself out is heartbreaking!! And I'm just a reader.. then the fight with his father.. for a second, to me anyways, I felt as if Severus was not just simply dismissing Harry, but telling him he didn't want him.. I cried (not much, just a few tears). Then Pettigrew... oh boy, oh boy...

Aw, I'm glad he made friends with Violet. He deserves it. Oh and Draco was hilarious and Harry not knowing what was going on because he hadn't had a chance to research it yet. He's so silly sometimes - I love it. A very nice chapter, I love the sweetness.

Wahh!! I forgot about Violet haha Seems like she'll be similar to Ginny, though. It's so cute that Snape and Lucius are together!! <3 Next to Draco/Harry and Snape/Harry, they're my favorite pair.

wrinkles nose. rat boy just doesn't have Siri's scare factor going. he's too pathetic. You're going to have to get really creative to make this fly.
Interesting. I wonder if we'll learn more about the crying woman, like who and why n such. I can't beleive they'd call out the dementors for lil pete.
I'm glad Vi takes after Lily personality wise. She's a little sweety where as jonny boy is a total butt munch. why is Mio friends with him again? At least Har in his place had some redeaming features. Jonny seems all bravado and 'tude with little to back it.
Draco's Veela is going to be a problem, this is painfully obvious. outright defiance of Sev, ooooh, not smart. I would have thought the internal disputes would stay in the snake pit out of the public eye... even if draco is doing the angsty teen veela thing, his father would be most disappointed indeed and it's odds on that sev will pass on a report of his behavior if this keeps up.

Aww pooey, my guess about how Serverus will react is down the drain. Anyway thanks for the chapter update. At least Harry can be a big brother to Violet (I had forgotten about her). So maybe Lily didn't want to give up Harry, it makes since because of the crying he heard. About Draco snaping at Serverus that's going to be a huge fight wow. I wonder what the twins are up too.