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Sorry I haven't read in a while, my summer classes started and I'm already behind >.<' I never thought about Harry/Cedric, but now I'm curious... Gotta check out that pairing lol The whole Luna veela thing is interesting, this is the first fic I've read that had different kinds of veela. At least Draco's (mostly) matured, and is treating Harry very sweetly as usual <3

Please don't be discouraged! I have been reading this story since the beginning and I look forward to each and every chapter! The regular updates are awesome but I'm not big on reviewing chapter after chapter of the same stories. I'm glad that there are more scenes of Draco and Harry loving! I'll be looking for the next update.

rack wise, you can have some of mine, i'll let you. no seriously, they just get in my way and make under things shopping difficult.

*shakes my head at draco. He manages to make an impression by being completely nonchalant in this case rather than dramatic. It's a talent. ^^

ah, i see miss utterly nutters made her move... such as it was. Why the hell's she in Slyth again? she's as subtle as a brick to the face... I hope she and her equally unintelligent off-sider leave it at that or Draco will rip her apart. He and Har don't need that sort of distraction. They're soon going to have bigger fish to fry.

heh, no wonder Vi's in Gryff, quite a bold, fiesty little thing.

snickers... so SPEW does make an make an appearance *snickers more. Run, save yourselves... bwahahahaha. Well, at least Jonny boy listened to her spiel. ^^

Not moody is giving himself away a bit isn't he. wow, har has good instincts, or possibly is very intuitive, cause all of those he's had a sudden inexplicable dislike for have turned out to be Voldi related. still, watching those would have been especially offensive to har. I noticed you didn't have him trying to fight Imperious. Is that cause it's not important in this fic or just that this Har can't. oooh, da javu flash... did i ask this in an earlier review?

Sev's acting funny? I thought he was very much the comforting , doting papa just then.

Draco's doing very well controlling himself. Nicly done Gred Forge.
i do hope that har does get the laws changed. It wouldn't even be entirely selfish since many other veela /phantom mate couples would benefit from it. are any negative effects besides the usual broken heart if a phantom mate doesn't accept?

Once again har proves 'pacifist DOES NOT mean door mat' Har is at least as spirited as his sister, he just has less cause to show it most of the time.

ooooh, so Ceddy has a thing for our Har does he. I don't think he'll have much chance against har's Veela pseudo mate. I really hope he doesn't get dead. Har will be really hurt.

good grief, you could almost hear the 'Rival!' (complete with anime evil glow starry eyes) and the 'And there will be WAR between us,' couldn't you.

til next time.

Ooh what's going on with Cedric? Bit of a love triangle going on, lucky Harry. Another wonderful chapter I love the possessive Draco and Harry giving Zambini a well deserved telling off. I'm really looking forward to this CedricxDracoxHarry thing stirring up the pot a little I love it!

Good update. Love the possessive draco. Hope more is to come soon. I also wonder what is wrong with several hope we find out soon. He isn't slowly realing away from harry I hope. Please don't let that be the case.

Lovely chapter. I really enjoy this story, unfortunately I read the chapters then go huh that was cool, and don't have much to say... I loved the start of the jealous confrontation between Malfoy and Cedric, poor Harry is so oblivious. Not to mention the three unforgivables scene was awesome. I can't wait to see the next chapter!
~Pen

So, is Sev not happy with Draco and Harry being together? I kinda got that vibe. Of course, I love a good family dispute, and I do kinda hope that Sev walks in on Harry and Draco doing a bit more than just talking lol. Great chapter:)

Could the experts be wrong? Maybe Harry isn't a phantom mate but a true mate? And why aren't phantom mates protected? Just because the Veela can live without them doesn't mean the relationship is any different. And Draco's exes are going to be a problem. Someone better watch Brittany and Spari.

Aww I'm sorry! I didn't mean for that to come out as the infamous backhanded review but I suppose it did didn't it?
Sorry about that! ^^; I do very much enjoy the story though! I check to see if you've updated all the time, lol. So keep up the good work and, I'll promise to leave a review now and then to prove I'm still here enjoying your awesome work. ;)

I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a while I had crazy family stuff and didn't even touch my computer for forever. You seemed sad about a lack of story attention so I wanted to assure you I haven't lost interest! I got three awesome chapters to read in a row which was very awesome. I'm glad Harry isn't putting up with Sirius' nonsense and defends Snape the man needs people to stick up for him. Oh and I of course love the little fatherxson HarryxSnape moments so I was all yay!!! When Snape came and hugged Harry and cried, it was just so sweet! I feel a little sad for Draco not being a 'true' Veela but I'm so happy that he and Harry are still going to act like mates. It shall make for some fun situations in future I think. And I loved that line about Snape doing random virginity checks like a bed check or something it made me laugh. I liked that Snape had a real sort of parent reaction to his sons relationship it was another sweet moment. Looking forward to your next chapter with some goblet of fire goodiness :)