rate_review Reviews

I loved the story! Unusual pairing but great story telling! Thank you for sharing!

It was a great pleasure to read a story with this unusual pairing. I loved it. Your sex scenes were sizzling and the gradual falling in love was believable and fun to read. I would love to read more stories featuring rare pairs. I'm a particular fan of stories that pair Hermione with Theo, the intelligent, tall Slytherin about whom very little is known so you can embellish all you want, as you did so delightfully with Yaxley. Thanks for the fine story.

I was excited to have come across a story featuring Yaxley and Hermione as I had been considering writing something about them for quite a while. I have just sat and read the whole thing from start to finish and loved every minute of it. Your story contains many clever ideas and the characters were so beautifully written that I got completely drawn into the world you created. I would definitely be happy reading more about them, whether as a sequel or standalone stories. Hurrah for unusual pairings! :)

I am in awe at your story, its so hot and naughty, and I love the older male DE/younger females pairing. Please update this awesome story.

Your story is great! The pairing is unique and I can't wait for more. I would like to see Severus Snape live. Also you should do a relationship between Severus and Luna, it would be interesting.

If both Hermione and "Yarborough" survive the final battle, I look forward to his trying to be all chauvanistic, now there's a battle, lol. Are we invited to the wedding?

I like Yarborough, it's not a constallation but it immediately popped in my head and I like how it sounds with Yaxley even if it is a bit of a tongue twister.

I commend you on your intertwining of actual story facts without the nauseating regurgitation of the original story line. Well done! I can't wait to read how you have Yaxley learn that he's going to be a father. I also found it a bit humorous that Snape asked Yaxley what his intentions were for Hermione. Also, if Snape was able to find Grimmauld place, shouldn't others be able to, add the fact that Snape was able to penetrate the wards, well.... it's not a very safe place for Harry and company to stay at yet, this was not mentioned or noticed? by those living there.

Wow, amazing story, as usual! I don't know if I can send a website in a message or not, but even though the movies have a Yaxley I can only think of Viking Carrot's Death Eater cards version of Yaxley. Very nice! The link to her website is below if it works, otherwise you have to look them up if you haven't seen them before. Anyway, loving this story, even though poor Hermione right now, I'm sure things will end up good for her. I like Snape being involved too!

http://www.viking-carrot.net/hpdecards.html

Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating so often! I have mono so I've been ridiculously bored at home and I love frequent updates! This was a really good chapter and I'm so happy that Yaxley was so excited for the baby. As I am in love with Severus Snape, I have to insist that you allow him to live or I will be very upset. I am going to play the "I have mono please take pity on me" card to hopefully ensure his survival. Keep writing and I love this story!

I want severus to live!! >_< lol and I love the sound of luna and snape.