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Huh... seriously, no holding up the suspense of Harry's creature! Also, count my -1 vote for Snape ;) I've no idea what people see in that prick and Harry, there's way too much history between James, Lily & Snape to make the pairing in anyway believable! Also... who would like to kiss, let alone have sex with a Professor that not only you had classes with, but also made those classes hell? (of course, James/Severus is another thing entirely! *nods to self*)

Okay I am breaking this review into parts so it is easier for me to think

first a reply to your forum reply your forum reply of my last review

It is not so much that I love crack pairing so much as I am a gay guy who loves gay bears and honestly like them either fat or muscular or a combination of them and there are not that many hairy chested guys in the book I have also come to recently lover interracial pairings to where a black guy dominates the white guy and the black guy is muscular. I also find it a real turn on when a bear or older and larger men dominates a twink which is why I love those pairings

I also love Dark Harry fics and I feel like Harry should always have either a mate bond or blood relationship such as father and son or grandson and grandson link so that is why I tend to put him as one of my fav pairings so those are why I love those pairings



Second: suggestions for creatures Harry

I would like to suggest a lamia Harry: If you need to search this I would suggest using the plural version lamiae, you can find them in greek mythology

A rare male Yuki-onna or some type of ice demon because of the powers he had already shown or a nymph who can control snow and ice

A succubus because I love fics where Harry is a succubus. Also just to clear it up I don't view succubae as female sex demons but sex demons who feed by being sexually penetrated

also if you might go higher then five I want to suggest a kitsune with Harry having nine tails to represent the number of mates and have each tail represent not only the number of mates but how inheritently powerful a kitsune is and nine being the highest and the more powerful a kitsune the more mates they have




Third my votes

I am unsure if you are only counting a person's vote once or if they need to vote each chapter incase they change there minds but basically I am voting for my same suggestions as earlier.

However if you are doing - votes I want to put

-100 votes Lucius,Draco and Snape merely because there are way to many of those already in the fanfic world and I would like some change plus they are some of my least favorite pairings with Harry along with Dumbledore (*wretch*)

+100 votes towards my original suggestions

Oh and I would love Remus to. can you imagine what it would be like if Harry had threesomes with Remus and Fenrir with Fenrir being Dominate (bed wise) Remus the versatile and Harry the sub (I like strong subs)




Part four: suggestions

also if you do Hermione with multi men I would make one or more of the men the creatures and have them mate with her and the other boys

also if you are still debating the number of mates can I suggest seven mates for Harry the reason being that in the magical world, even in HP this had been confirmed, seven is the most magical number. It was because of this that Voldemort purposely split his soul into seven pieces.

Now as I mentioned I hate Lucius/Harry and Snape/Harry Draco isn't that big of a problem to me I am just sick of seeing the amounts of Drarry and Snarry's. However I do love them as father and father figures to Harry and if Harry got his creature inheritance from his mother and she to was a creature with a harem I would love to see those two being in past relationships with Lily

Now are all of Harry's mates going to have a second mate in his harem because I think various threesomes with Harry and two members of his harem would be a good idea especially for the mates who are horny from watching Harry being taken and need to touch another


Part five: final comment

I know that the story is writing itself that is what I am doing on most of my fics on normal ff.net (I find it easier to put stories on there and I haven't gotten red lighted so until then that is where the stories go) which is why I keep making suggestions because I know this can help authors and I honestly hope that by doing so people might use them so I probably still will keep giving you suggestions for as long as you let me or I have any suggestions especially if you get stuck in writers block. Also logic for a suggestion tends to make it easier to think about

and i'm guessing their critter is compatible with Harry's critter if not mates. As to Harry's critter... some sort of elemental? I wonder if snape has critter blood?

-1 Draco.
Theo or someone not commonly used at least.

Love the story keep up the good work.

For harry pairing i think if there are 5 mates ... draco,sev,luc,fred,george.... and for hermione(sp?)... bas and/or nev... seeing as harry has more then one....as of ch 2 i love the plot (havent read 3 yet).. tho i cant figure out what harry is creature wise.. and i agree with... shoot forgot name(sorry) about mpreg think it should be one keep up great work

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ch3: yummy chapter. I vote for Snape.

Wow!!! Just....Wow!!!! I love fics with Fred, George, and Harry as partners. Yours is NOT disappointing me at all! I love it!! How many mates is Harry going to have in this fic? Cuz my votes are tied, sorta. I'm a huge fan of Draco/Harry, Snape/Harry, AND LV/Harry. My most favorite of them being Snape/Harry. I can't wait to read more!!!

my votes are for Harry/Snape and or Harry/Lucius

Hmm, Looking at the choices, I'd guess that you might be making Voldemort a Harry-Mate and I would love to see what king of combination he would make with the twins, Bill and Lucius. Can I negatively vote for Snape? I just don't like Snarry and don't get why it's so popular. Honestly it's kinda creepy seeing as Snape was in love with Lily and has so much history with Harry's parental figures, I don't think that either person's pride would allow them to get over that.

So votes for Bill and Lucius because they're hot and I like their personalities. And another for Voldemort because he has that evil overlord thing going for him and you gotta admit, he knows how to work it!

For Hermione, I think I'd prefer Blaise, and for Draco maybe Neville, or all four of them together? Harry doesn't have to be the only one who lucks into a polyamorous relationship!

In terms of the storyline, I like the way it's going and I'm glad that it's not so heavy on the bashing which I find can easily ruin a fanfic, I'm curious as to what you're going to do with Ginny, part of me would like Harry and Ron to remain friends, but that is mainly because it's my favourite pairing at the moment and I think that the whole him being jealous and scared just shows that he's human, and he proved himself by going back and apologising to Harry. Also he hasn't abandoned Hermione and Harry during Horcrux hunting yet so I don't think that should be used against his character.

Of course this is you're story, so it's all your choice! feel free to ignore my arguments against RonBashing (If none does occur, my favourite Ron pairing after RonHarry is BlaiseRon) :D