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for Within the Lies

by Sylvia

person DemonLordLife
schedule December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lurve
person Alley
schedule November 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I honestly love this story, but I never know that it has updated; lol.
I always randomly stumble across it and remember what it is.
Congrats by the way!
Can't wait to read more of this delicious story.
Is there a way that I can keep updated on when you update?
Alley_Blaze
schedule November 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on the coming baby! Great update. I hate waiting for more, but I understand.
schedule November 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
poor Har. He's still so ambivalent about all of this.
still wb. been a while and ty 4 t update
person nari-chan
schedule November 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on the baby . And awasome story so far and can't wait to find out what happens next .rember rest and write more soon.
schedule November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thank you both for this update and hope you feel better soon though without it costing you.

Is there still going to be a poll?
schedule November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay, so glad to see more of this! and they're starting to figure out their place in things, but who could these mysterious others be *cue dramatic music* great story so far, can't wait to see what happens next. oh, and can i just say, i could totally see you lovely people cackling evilly at the mention of what's happening next chapter lol. and lastly, a big congrats to you, mama!
schedule September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ch7: yummy ending. Harry is right; people will think he's a little more nuttier than usual
person heartstar
schedule September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this more please
schedule September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was just re reading to pick up the story again and i noticed something. where you said withering (meaning to wither as in to wither away to nothing)did you mean writhing (to writhe, wiggle in place etc)... so many people are getting this wrong it's becoming a pet peev of mine. >>
just sticking my two cents worth in for the votes, mio and blaise I like and snape should definitely be a mate.
do the twins have critter blood? It should be something mischievous like a faun or a sprite or even kitsune if they do... though that might raise problems as to why it hasn't come out in the rest of the family.
So what happened to the modern dementors to make them look and be all weeooweeeooo?