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for It Wasn't Enough

by ObsidianGrace

schedule August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw Harry you had such a Pygmalion moment right there, I'm surprised you didn't catch on.

This was quite interesting, kudos to you.
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. Even I thought that dream was really creepy. Great one-shot.
person Michael
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very subtle, a nice way to tease the reader without giving up the goods too soon.
Most of these stories end up in the first chapter Snape throwing Harry on a desk and going at it.
Not that it is always a bad thing, but, it is over done.
Creative new twist on a pairing that has seen better days in the fanfiction world.
Now I demand a sequal, I know where you live...sorta. :p
schedule July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Everyone grieves and copes with tragidy in thheir own way. Making a memorial to someone who was undervalued and short changed but whom you respect and acknowledge even if they were not a nice person isn't that far out of a way to cope.
besides, art therapy is a good thing, neh?
That dream was a bit out there though... I suppose that's what happens when you focus on just one thing continuously for months. :P