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Love it! very well written and incredibly sexy!

How utterly awkward... and intense! This is going to happen again isn't it. I can just see it. They're both so very broken.

OMG chapter six was amazing! I absolutely loved it! You write really hot sex scenes! I thought it was pretty cool that even though Harry was partially trying to make it seem like for his own sake he was being forced to endure sex with Draco, but still really wanted to cuddle with him afterward. I loved all the romantic touches like when they entwined their hands together. I can't wait to see where your story goes. I wonder if they'll grow closer and eventually Harry will dump Ginny or if Harry thinks that one time is it for him and Draco has to fight to keep him with him. I don't know where your story is going but I can't wait to find out. I was so happy that the chapter was nice and long and filled with a very oh so delicious love scene, it was so worth the wait! I might someday write that story idea but it'll be a while because today I go back to college life. Again I love your work, your fan CJB.

Oh, eek, I haven't enjoyed a fanfic so much in a long time! I was holding my breath as I read, hanging onto every word. Brilliant from beginning to end, but especially the first chapter was so perfect and gripping and made me cry with pity. Sex is usually so gratuitous and worthless, but you made it into a great character study and used it to develop a fantastic plot. You really are an exceptional, talented writer, and it made me genuinely happy to read this! I loved lines like, "they weren

I absolutely love this fic. :) I love love Draco torture, and prisoner rape fics where the so called tormentor suffers more than the prisoner, which is this fic in a nutshell. This bit "He flinched away instinctively, and sensed Draco recoil halfway across the room. Harry rolled his eyes." had me laughing out loud. I know it's supposed to be serious but I could just see it so well and I loved how Harry was all "okay seriously just do it already. :/" ah good ol' Harry. XD And then I read to the end and I must say I'm really looking forwards to more. I like how you've written adult Harry and Draco... Draco's got his arrogant personality back and it feels like Harry is a bit of the confused one now. I'm eager to see what you do with it. Thanks for the great fic!

I'm really enjoying how this story is unfolding... I hope you keep it up!

I loved the new chapter and I was happy that it seemed longer, but I hated the cliff hanger I wish there had been more to read. I have a big smile on my face and I can't wait for the next chapter. I get that Harry seems almost like he has unfinished business with Draco, because he had been turned on by sex with Draco and didn't allow himself to come. It's like he has unanswered questions about himself; did some part of Voldemort rub off on him or still live inside his mind or heart or did he truely just missed the fact that Draco and he are a match made in heaven. Does he have problems with the way he feels because he might be scared of how his friends and the rest of the wizard world would feel and act towards him if they knew their saint Potter had fallen for an Ex-Death Eater. Will Harry ever share the duties as a top once he has closure as a bottom? It felt like Harry was such a take charge and dominant character that him sharing that position with Draco would give him some semblance of control back in his life if he can't get Draco out of his system. Harry having the chance to dominate Draco back would be totally hot and like their natural competiveness to one up each other all the time. Any ways sorry for rambuling on. I can't wait for the next chapter and to see where your story goes.

Just hope Harry has his head together enough so that Malfoy will know Har would rather be the usey rather than the user.

I'm anxious for the next update!

Chapter four was so much better. But I wish you would write longer chapters like chapter one but I know at that time you thought your story would only be a one shot. I liked that Malfoy thought Harry is after revenge or equality and is willingly offering to give it to Harry. That is way cooler an idea than Malfory being arrogant and a pampous ass and thinking Harry was lusting after him. With Malfoy thinking Harry wants to get back at him It makes me think that he still feels guilty for what he had to do to Harry. But it truly says he does replay that memory over and over in his head. This chapter made me wonder if Draco really didn't see Harry's erection predicament in the first chapter. I thought werewolf tag was pretty awesome. I can't wait to see how your story plays out.