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This is my favorite ongoing fanfic ever, please don't end it now. There's so much to tell! Does Draco ever heal? Do he and Harry ever meet again? How does Harry feel after?

I would like to see Harry and Draco together at the end somehow. Perhaps Harry finding that no one can quite sate him the way Draco does and going more deeply into why, and his feelings. I am not sure, I think there are many ways to reach that conclusion but I would like to see them together somehow. Excellent work!

no!dont stop.is it too much to ask for a happy ending for draco and harry?together.it'd be interesting to see how you managed it anyways.i will be waiting to see what happens

more pls. you can't just leave poor draco wallowing like that. Sure he did and was made to do awful stuff but I don't think he should drown in guilt forever. After all, the 'light' side did some pretty not to kosher stuff too.

I love your story! I don't think it's done, I think there is lots more to tell. I think that Draco and Harry need to face their dark demons together and help each other heal. It wont be easy because neither one would want to openly show their weaknesses and seek help for them especially from each other. I think that they need to face this attraction/connection to each other that has basically been in their lives since they met at Madam Malkin's Robe shop. I think Harry needs to struggle between deciding to stay in a safe, boring and easy relationship with Ginny and the scary feeling of falling in love with someone who is the same sex and who he can't easily have as a boyfriend in the new wizarding society. Draco needs to fight his mind's dark demons and get healthier both in his mind and body. He needs to grow into a man's healthy body. I think it would also be interesting to find out what Draco's job is and what his plans are for the restoration of the Malfoy name. Maybe he invents some new potion. Maybe a potion that restores one sanity and it helps the Longbottoms. Will Harry start a family with Ginny or Draco? I mean they are wizards it's not a stretch to think that gay or lesbian wizards would find a way to use magic to have babies with their partners. I think Harry would be one to want family early in his life since he didn't get to experience a normal family's love for many years into his life. Also wouldn't there be some issues from Lucius if he found out that Draco and Harry were seeing each other. Could there be some new bad guy that Harry might have to face and he could seek Draco's help in solving and catching the killer. These are just a few ideas I'm hoping might help to inspire you to continue your story. Your fan CJB! P.S. I hope to read lots more of your story!

dont stop here! we dont realy know how harry feels after this second encounter and how it will effect his relationship with ginny, will he tell her? harry and draco need to talk about whats happening between them, because there certainly is something there. draco needs help facing his demons and maybe you could tell us some more about what he does now, potions? just keep up the good work

I think you are doing well in your story, Draco could not overcome the guilt of raping Harry and this is strange but felt pleasure Harry you are who can spin the story you want may end up Harry and Draco together, be lovers etc. thanks for writing your history

I think it would be interesting to have Draco confront Harry with what he's feeling - have a final 'showdown' so to speak. Somehow, the story doesn't seem finished where it is, and I think it's because you've created excellent tension and a great dynamic between Harry and Draco... I'd say, flesh it out and see where it goes and if you don't like what you write, don't post :) But there's a lot of potential here so please continue!

Love this story. So glad you decided to extend it. Can't wait for the next update!

wll, that worked brilliantly... not.