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October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
good luck explaining this one in the morning, Har.
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October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that you're continuing the story! I can't wait to read more! Thank you for thinking I should write stories. I have a couple of stories in mind; they are mainly novels and screenplays though. I try to work on my writing in-between school and homework but I have so many tough classes this semester that whenever I have freetime I spend it reading.
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October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm going crazy not knowing what happens next in your story. I check everyday to see if you have posted. Please continue your story.
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September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story still has plenty of potential. (And I don't just say that because you write some of the most passionate sex scenes I've ever read.) You have left both Harry and Draco with empty endings. No way was Harry just getting Draco out of his system.
Throughout the novels, Harry is basically stocking Draco, watching his every move. This plot point allows your Harry character to feel sorry for Draco because Draco was forced to be a Death Eater on Lucius' request. Harry can level with Draco and tell him that it's not his fault and that he was doing what he could for the sake of his family (or at least mother). Your story can continue with Harry not only wanting Draco physically but emotionally. Harry and desire to know more about Draco and how he ended up as a Death Eater, the horrors he faced, and how it has changed him. Harry has always (even in the novels) been curious about Draco and his actions and you can have that trend continue.
As for Draco, you still have him feeling cheated from his night with Harry because Harry was suppose to be the one to take him. Draco still needs to find rest from his nightmares. So, he is in the position to seek Harry out.
One thing you could have them do (and something I've thought would happen) is to both desire to see the other again to have sex. So they both could meet at the bar, both waiting for the other, but pretend to just run into each other. They could end up in bed together again, perhaps this time with Harry topping and then spending the night. Draco's nightmares could abate for that night with Harry. He would assume that it's because Harry finally topped. But really it's because he had someone next to him. However, that line of plot is really in trend right now. So you could have Harry topping, spending the night and then wake to comfort Draco from a nightmare. Then that leads to them talking about their past. If you want to stretch it out longer then they could have a full out sexual affair where Harry is there for Draco.
The only problem is what to do with Ginny. Killing her off is the easy way out. I suggest either having tabloids reporting that she's seeing another quidditch player while she's away and then Harry and Ginny can fight over it. Or Harry can be truthful. Really what you do about Ginny will depend on where the development of Draco and Harry's relationship is.
I hope this helps because I REALLY want to you continue with this story. There is so much going on and so much left dangling to leave it where is currently is.
Throughout the novels, Harry is basically stocking Draco, watching his every move. This plot point allows your Harry character to feel sorry for Draco because Draco was forced to be a Death Eater on Lucius' request. Harry can level with Draco and tell him that it's not his fault and that he was doing what he could for the sake of his family (or at least mother). Your story can continue with Harry not only wanting Draco physically but emotionally. Harry and desire to know more about Draco and how he ended up as a Death Eater, the horrors he faced, and how it has changed him. Harry has always (even in the novels) been curious about Draco and his actions and you can have that trend continue.
As for Draco, you still have him feeling cheated from his night with Harry because Harry was suppose to be the one to take him. Draco still needs to find rest from his nightmares. So, he is in the position to seek Harry out.
One thing you could have them do (and something I've thought would happen) is to both desire to see the other again to have sex. So they both could meet at the bar, both waiting for the other, but pretend to just run into each other. They could end up in bed together again, perhaps this time with Harry topping and then spending the night. Draco's nightmares could abate for that night with Harry. He would assume that it's because Harry finally topped. But really it's because he had someone next to him. However, that line of plot is really in trend right now. So you could have Harry topping, spending the night and then wake to comfort Draco from a nightmare. Then that leads to them talking about their past. If you want to stretch it out longer then they could have a full out sexual affair where Harry is there for Draco.
The only problem is what to do with Ginny. Killing her off is the easy way out. I suggest either having tabloids reporting that she's seeing another quidditch player while she's away and then Harry and Ginny can fight over it. Or Harry can be truthful. Really what you do about Ginny will depend on where the development of Draco and Harry's relationship is.
I hope this helps because I REALLY want to you continue with this story. There is so much going on and so much left dangling to leave it where is currently is.
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September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Draco! I love this so far and I'm itching to know where it goes. I hope he is able to eventually communicate with Harry... though that may be a bit hard... very yummy angst in this fic. Thank you for writing it!
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September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aww poor draco, and harry is none the wiser which is exactly why i believe there is more to tell. And how Harry shall face Ginny and how all of that comes about. Please write more!
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September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I agree with everyone above, the story has much more potential and I'd like to read more. This ending would be really depressing ;)
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September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gah, love it! Keep going please, Draco needs closure for his guilt!
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August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think this story has a lot of potential to continue. I have so many questions about what happens next, such as: do Draco and Harry meet up again, does Draco ever forgive and forget, do Draco and Harry form an even stronger relationship, what is Harry going to do now that he's gotten what he's wanted? I really hope you continue this story because I am hooked and can't wait to read more!
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August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Why leave it at such a sad ending? I think there are things that could still be explored. Ginny might complicate things but I think you could work with or around her.