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February 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
An update!!! :))) Been waiting for this for so long :)))
I love Draco in this story :) ANd I can't wait for some kind of talk about where all of this is leading :)
I wonder if Draco's parents will have a part in all of this?
Keep going ^^ This is a really nice story :)
I love Draco in this story :) ANd I can't wait for some kind of talk about where all of this is leading :)
I wonder if Draco's parents will have a part in all of this?
Keep going ^^ This is a really nice story :)
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January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi :) I've read the whole thing and really liked it :) The first chapter (that was supposed to be one shot) wasn't my favorite, but I think you did so well with the continuation of the story - Draco seems so real to me :) Love it and now am waiting for more :) Am absolutely curious to see how their relationship will develop from here :)
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January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I re-read this chapter and I must say I love it a lot! But I need more I'm dying to find out what happens next! Please update soon I don't want this story to die off or be forgotten!
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January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this story is so amazing <3 when i started reading it, it thought it was another one that starts sort of similarly, but this one was SO much better. C: i love the tension, it's built up very well. and i really love how you write Malfoy! he's so slithery and seductive C: hehe. <3
please write more!
please write more!
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December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow...just really really...wow. It's almost 5 am and I can't really think straight but this story is really something. I'm so glad you've continued it.
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December 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it's taken me so long to review but I have reread this chapter like four times. It's simply breathtaking! The way you write about Harry and Draco having sex . . . it's gorgeous, they both have so much passion behind their physical desires.
Your words make it sound more like they are making love to each other rather than using each other like they think they are doing. You write sentences like: ". . .he was too consumed with the feel of Malfoy moving nakedly beneath him to pay any sort of coherent attention to how they had gotten there." Meaning that Harry only Draco was on his mind and he was oblivious to all else.
The way you write of their kissing alone is enough to turn-on your readers: "Harry kissed his way down Malfoy
Your words make it sound more like they are making love to each other rather than using each other like they think they are doing. You write sentences like: ". . .he was too consumed with the feel of Malfoy moving nakedly beneath him to pay any sort of coherent attention to how they had gotten there." Meaning that Harry only Draco was on his mind and he was oblivious to all else.
The way you write of their kissing alone is enough to turn-on your readers: "Harry kissed his way down Malfoy
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December 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so glad you updated! :)
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November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this. I'd love to see the dis-function of them learn to function. Plus this fic is really hot. ;)
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November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
alcohol is evil, evil stuff. *nods
*winces. damn, they're both going to be feeling that one in the morning. I wonder if the the rivers of Egypt will be making another appearance.
*winces. damn, they're both going to be feeling that one in the morning. I wonder if the the rivers of Egypt will be making another appearance.
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November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
If Harry is a masochist both are your story I like