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for Under the Manor

by WillGirl

person Ashes
schedule May 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It was good, and I liked it even though I prefer it when Harry and Draco and up together. I can't help it, I've been shipping those two since before Order of the Phoenix.
I want to congratulate you though, I believe you are the only one to this date that has been able to make me almost like Ginny. Normally I can't stand her, not because I prefer Harry to end up with Draco, but because people always turn her into a Mary Sue. I don't know what you did differently, but I aaaaaaalmost like her.
person Me
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey. So I really, really loved this. It's dark and twisted and the characterizations are, of course, spot on. You're brilliant. This is brilliant.

<3

4 Stars.

Also: Yay! You updated. ;)
schedule March 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story. Really great.

The ending was nice too. I think you were right, it does read better w/o the deleted scene.
Thanks for the story! Keep up the good work!
schedule March 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't really like reading stories where the two characters don't end up together. I liked this story a lot until the last chapter but I'd never have touched it at all if I had known.

And Harry is a disgusting person for cheating on Ginny, especially since it was apparently a fling and not a long time thing.
schedule March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
it might not be the oh yay yaoi ending some might wish for, but it think it's a far more practical realistic ending... and i do hope draco does end up with astoria again. it think they'd be good for each other. ^^
person CJB
schedule February 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you have updated your story! I'm dying for more! Poor Harry and Draco. I hope they can move past the mishaps and find comfort in each other. I want Draco to approach Harry with an offer of courtship, and ask Harry to leave Ginny for him, I want this so badly. I feel bad for Draco having seen Harry flirt with Ginny. It always seems like Draco is denied Harry's attention. I wonder who was trying to attack Draco at that bar and if he'll try to strike again. Does Draco have a stalker, someone Harry might have to protect Draco from? I really can't wait to read more!
person Lumcer
schedule February 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow I find this story sad and yet breath taking, I hope there are more chapters coming and soon!

KCK-Lumcer
schedule February 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved that bit at the end about Malfoy having a haunted look. I bet he's been focused on Harry and what he did just like Harry was focused on Malfoy. I think Harry just did his best to move on. Will he start to remember Draco more now that he is past his guilt? If that made them both be able to leave the guilt behind... now are they ready to want each other just because they want each other?!? *fingers crossed*
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Such an awesome chapter!!! Harry's thoughts are going to be even more full of Draco!!
schedule February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awesome.... please keep going =]